Moon-Pearled Rose

Back with heartfelt wishes! Congratulations. Well deserved

Aha...what a beauty this is, Hiya your choice of words and thoughts are so powerful, Keep creating such moon pearled rosy verses.

I loved reading these beautiful lines. Congrats

Beautifully written indeed. A pleasure to read!

A beautiful Tanka Hiya, love that last line it’s exquisite… Belle

Enjoyed reading this, I like the metaphors :-) Good work!-AG

Very lovely romance! Have a sweet day lovely Hiya :-) best regards and warmest wishes, AA

Exquisite Poem Hiya….the last line is simply beautiful! Debx

Very romantic -- love should entertain all of our senses -- color, taste, scent and spirit. Excellent poetry!

Dreamy last line Hiya ...

I never knew a tanka can be made so beautiful. Excellent diction ! Beautiful torrent of images.

This is like poetic chocolate cake so sweet and decadent in the best ways. I love the word choice...moon pearled and melting sun. Ah so good it's yummy. Lol

Your tanka is brimming with breathtaking imagery. The way you carefully choose your words and employ metaphors is truly masterful. Best of luck in the contest; your talent deserves to be recognized.

Love the imagery in your poem, maple sun melts ( I picture syrup melting over the horizon.)

Your alliteration made this a grand poem. Blessings.

Fabulous as always, Hiya--ornate vocabulary!

Nice imagery, I really enjoyed reading this and the words you used here. Nice and clever write :-) -AG

Lovely imagery in your tanka..Your selection of words and use of metaphor are very nice.. Good luck in the contest..

Ive run out of enough words to describe how beautiful this tanka is my angelic star! I love the descriptive diction, the autumnal imagery and flow of your tanka. Your use of colors and that opening line too “ when maple sun melts” ahh my heart! And also how you’ve written “ pale loves snowy scent” your use of alliterations and the way you’ve paired words is impeccable! And guess wats my fave line “ im your midnight moon pearled rose” wow! Just wow! Pls set it as a prompt on insta! So i can use!