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Moonlit Pool No H-E-A-D-S

Moonlit pool - Icy, wintry Ignoring my buoy Ignoring my will No control I jump in Boggy, limp, put out For you But you point You run My tomorrow - Forlorn Lowly I bow In my icy, wintry Moonlit pool By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Eighth place in No Heads or Tails Contest (Jan. 2012)

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Date: 3/30/2013 4:26:00 PM
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Rhonda, this endures a good flowing verse, enjoyed your poem. Many Blessings with your Featured Poem of the week. By the way no matter my blue color or tune I am always here, spreading the colorful cheer.....Happy Easter!" xox~ LINDA
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Vince Suzadail Jr.
Date: 3/25/2013 1:40:00 PM
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Congrats on your featured write,
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Kash Poet
Date: 2/1/2012 3:20:00 AM
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Rhonda,congrats on your win in nikko's contest.Good write here.
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 1/31/2012 11:42:00 PM
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This was such a beautiful and sad write, Rhonda-- I could somehow picture this vividly as well, super congrats on your win! :D
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/1/2012 1:14:00 AM
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Thank you kindly for the placement! Looking forward to the next contest. Blessings, Rhonda
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Greg Stanley
Date: 1/31/2012 2:40:00 PM
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Very nicely done Rhonda, congratulations on you win, Greg
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/1/2012 1:14:00 AM
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Thanks, Greg!! Blessings, Rhonda
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 1/31/2012 1:13:00 PM
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Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/31/2012 1:38:00 PM
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Thank you, Carol!!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/31/2012 11:03:00 AM
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Good one, Congratulations, x
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/31/2012 1:37:00 PM
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Thanks, Mandy!!!
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Wilma Neels
Date: 1/12/2012 6:34:00 AM
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If this is for Missy's contest, wishing you all the best with it :) enjoyed this one!! blessings Wilma :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/12/2012 6:49:00 AM
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Thank you, Wilma! Glad you enjoyed it. Blessings :)
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Kash Poet
Date: 1/11/2012 1:33:00 AM
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You have done it excellently Rhonda.Love it.Visit my NO HEADS poem 'your inviting look':)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/11/2012 6:49:00 AM
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Thanks so much! I enjoyed the challenge. Next time I'll try TAILS. Just read 'Your Inviting Look' and loved it!

Book: Shattered Sighs