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Moonlit Music

Moonlit Music

     Dusty dusk wearing charcoal mask emerged
      to tranquil turquoise canvas of firmament.    
      On ebon night Full Moon marooned in starless sky
      watching own shimmering reflection in aqua flow
                                               on glimmering glow.
                    
     Gentle breeze creating whorls on wavy aqueous surface
     framing lattice of shadows of foliage alongside.
     Muse of lone heart dribbling dripping in rue,
     starting prelude of song of long-lost love 
                                as I had to bid you adieu.
                       
      Lingering urge and tingling passion 
      flickering with subdued luminous Moonbeam        
      penetrating through aqua layers
     trying to touch abyss of lamenting emotion.
     Fervid fervent fervor of forgotten amour 
                         flowing forlorn in despondent solitude.
                         Cadence continued through interlude.
      
      Yearnings torn in pieces and wisps
      whisper to mourn on creases of waves.
      Moonbeams quiver
      inside water-mirror 
      in grim gleam,
      melting in melancholy
      trying to synchronize with melody
      of mystic music in gloomy glissando.
                                                    

    09/30/20

                                                                   First  Place
  'Impact and Metaphors'  Contest by William Kakaula
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Raina Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 8:32 PM
Beautifully written!! All magical..
Dutta Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 10:13 PM
Thanks Meenakhi. Love.
Kauffman Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 6:28 PM
Magical, mysterious and just plain lovely Anisha. What a beautiful picture that draws us into serenity. So pleased for you! Congratulations on your top first place win! Well deserved my friend!
Blodgett Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 4:31 PM
Beautiful, mystical, emotional content! loved it!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 2:40 PM
Yours is the best, Anisha, I read it more than once, absolutely breathtaking, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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