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Moonlight on Meadows

Now starved of sleep I watch the shadows creep, this selfish heart now seething with desire, beats and beats - relentless thrums grow deep- they hide, oh how they hide inside the fire! Then...peaceful in the meadow is this gloom, in lunar lumen's self-defining light, that cowers from the truth that dwells at noon in one forgotten moment of its flight. Precocious shadows sweep the slumbered fields, like children of the day that tease the sun, to loose the resurrection that it yields while owls of conscience watch which way I run. As moonlit meadows wander in my dreams, my peaceful posture's not quite what it seems...

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Date: 2/20/2025 7:20:00 AM
Revisiting this fave today Craig. So well written. You and Mark are master sonneteers
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Date: 10/12/2024 3:57:00 PM
This is an awesome piece beautifully done
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Date: 9/13/2024 6:02:00 AM
Very beautiful and well deserved win.
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Date: 9/6/2024 12:06:00 PM
"that cowers from the truth that dwells at noon" Brilliant! What darkness hides, light reveals. Congratulations!!!!! Xo
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Date: 9/6/2024 5:45:00 AM
A very well written Sonnet with just the right amount of Alliteration so as not to make it taxing to read, Craig. "Precocious shadows sweep the slumbered fields"... that's poetic sagacity.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 9/6/2024 7:01:00 AM
Thanks so much Lin!
Date: 9/5/2024 5:13:00 AM
Dear craig, the way you express and write is so achingly touching and beautiful! To the heart and soul of the reader! Brilliant flow and cadence as well as rhymes are on point! I love your subtle use of alliterations as well as the way youv written “ this selfish heart now seething with desire,l ah the depth there! “ children of the day that tease the sun,” soulfully moving and the ending is impeccable! As always emanates that evocative touch i find in your words! Congratulations on your win. A fave this is for me
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Craig Cornish
Date: 9/5/2024 4:20:00 PM
You're a gem Inky....!
Date: 8/18/2024 1:44:00 PM
Gosh you're so good. This is a masterpiece and a fave. Thx for helping learners like inky and me along the way
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Craig Cornish
Date: 8/20/2024 1:33:00 PM
Thank you, Thomas, we learn from each other...
Date: 8/18/2024 7:56:00 AM
Beautifully captured, Craig: Hard to turn our minds off at night with so much in them. A real feeling of elusive dreams and that feeling of not having slept much. Best, SuZ
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Craig Cornish
Date: 8/20/2024 1:34:00 PM
Right there Dear Suz - thank you!

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