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bruised but alive thrumming heart ... bloodied hand trembling I measure the moon with my thumb as I watch the long boat drift away downriver - YOU are on it ... with the king's entourage and I have lost you all over again yes, I have my life, (though beaten to near death) but I wish now I did not ... for every breath finds you farther from me heartstrings stretched to breaking as the weeping moon shivers in the sky its tears glistening on the back of the Great Mekong like a mocking serpent ... hissing its melancholy venom in my face the wake of the ship pointing the way I MUST follow … you will become but another of many wives to His Majesty yet you are my world, complete and there shall never be another … this … is NOT done ... I am too weak to move ... yet but soon I SHALL pursue to all of Earth's ends, if need be and I shall keep my promise to you - made under Heaven, in the gardens of the palace and consummated amidst our passion an internal moment that stands still in my mind when, as one, we brought blush to the sky itself for it had never seen a love as ours divine and rare ... with truth and trust and a joining that has never known another pure, sacred, tender ... and chaste unto itself and the stars I know your gaze is on the very same moon - that you bathe now in its weep and THAT shall be our binding ... for now until I rise and follow ... and ride the mighty, twisted back of the Mekong to find you, safe, and bring you home my life ... my love. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand Choice 3 Any Theme Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ( For Sammi )

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Date: 1/24/2020 11:01:00 AM
Gregory, Congratulations on your top placement with this lyric, story of love lost. So many wonderful images - so much emotion carried by each line!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2020 11:01:00 PM
Thank you so very much for this kind and heartfelt comment, Sam - it means a great deal. Blessings, my friend! :o)
Date: 1/23/2020 5:27:00 PM
Extraordinary. Beautiful and well done.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2020 11:00:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Eric - blessings, Brother!
Date: 1/17/2019 11:29:00 AM
Yeah, I love it! You are a great storyteller Greg, is it a soldier who falls for a local Viet girl? Would make a great TV movie hey a new shogun series?
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/21/2019 2:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, John, I'm glad you enjoyed this ... it is actually about a young beauty who is already betrothed, being sold as a wife to the King of Siam, and her Persian prince vowing to rescue her, but whatever your imagination takes you to will work just fine! :-)

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