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Moonlight Dancing

It is not so much for its beauty that the forest makes a claim upon men’s hearts, as for that subtle something, that quality of air that emanation from old trees, that so wonderfully changes and renews a weary spirit. Robert Louis Stevenson
Beneath the lofty canopy of ancient white oaks, luminous beams of moonlight were dancing. Their rhythmic cadence observed by amber eyes, a pack of hunters, roaming the woodlands. Myriads of stars were quickly fading from view as ashen skies paled to blue across the horizon. Dawn bathed the land in soft morning light, embellishing the rolling hills. A new day was born. The first rays of sunlight gilded droplets of dew, and upon beds of moss, night creatures slept. March 8, 2022 Form I - Imagism - New Poem Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 3/19/2022 8:13:00 AM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest with your beautiful poem full of lovely imagery and I love your image and quote used also ~Constance
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Date: 3/19/2022 12:26:00 AM
Great moon light scene. Beautifully illuminated. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/18/2022 12:47:00 PM
Gorgeous! Congratulations, Jenna!
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Date: 3/11/2022 9:30:00 AM
I love your imagery, Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/11/2022 9:55:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike.
Date: 3/8/2022 9:49:00 AM
Stunning imagery Jenna, very discriptive, you take the reader from the night and sunrise. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2022 10:05:00 AM
Dear Tom, What an awesome night it would be to witness such beautiful images in nature. Thanks for being there with me. ;)
Date: 3/8/2022 8:18:00 AM
Jenna, in my humble opinion, your poem is the epitome of imagism. Simply lovely, your images are crisp and precise, and the poem flows along like every really good poem should. Surely this is a winner!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2022 10:04:00 AM
Dear Milt, I am so pleased to read your detailed remarks on these lines of imagery. Thank you for always supporting my poetry.

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