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Moonlight

I remember the first time my family rented a summer vacation cottage at Long Beach, North Carolina. Darkness had fallen by the time we finished unloading the car. I came in with the last load and after dropping the box in the kitchen, went out to the screen porch where Mother was standing. first night the full moon floats on silver waves Every now and then through the years, she would remind me of how beautiful she found the moonlit ocean and how precious the memory. I remember those pitchers of iced tea, countless meals, covering my brother and me with lotions. She could drink coffee and gaze at the ocean for hours. waist deep in the sea "can't you come in a little" current pulls at my feet Published, Contemporary Haibun Online

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Date: 5/18/2015 1:26:00 AM
Congrats on the placement win Thomas..'
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Date: 5/16/2015 2:46:00 PM
Thomas, Congratulations on your Memory of the sea win. LUV LINDA
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Date: 5/16/2015 10:24:00 AM
wonderful win Thomas..... skat
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:23:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Thomas:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/5/2015 8:39:00 PM
Lovely memories Thomas, like Jan I havent attempted this form,yet. well done ....Seren
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Date: 4/5/2015 7:41:00 PM
I have never seen let alone attempted this form Martin - the story you tell it is truly beautiful especially with the imagery of the haiku:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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