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Moongone

I plucked the moon out of a blackened sky To save it from the music of Orion's wrath The universe, now without its lover Played its tune among the stars Adapted from Moonsong by Deb Guzzi The moon sat, plunked in a cobalt sky punctuating the stratus a wane full note on a blank scale resonating, pulsating, pregnant in it’s fullness and the string was plucked.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/30/2010 12:43:00 PM
yOu are very creative, Barbara and congrats for doing well in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/30/2010 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Critcise Me". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2010 10:26:00 PM
Congratulations, Barbara, on your success in deborah's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/25/2010 7:34:00 PM
You did a wonderful job at making Deb's poem your own ~ I found this challenge very difficult to do ~ best of luck in the contest
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Date: 7/24/2010 6:59:00 PM
A nice adaptation. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/24/2010 7:26:00 AM
Wow...Debbie sure awakened a lot of inspiring words inside you! Great job in metamorphosing her poem! Good luck in the contest! Emily
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Date: 7/24/2010 7:03:00 AM
I envision a ripe rising being plucked, yuck! sorry I couldn't help myself.
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Date: 7/24/2010 6:24:00 AM
I think this could be a difficult contest to judge! Good luck, Barbra : )
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Date: 7/23/2010 9:59:00 PM
Barbara, I love this.. All the best for the contest.. You had me smiling with you comment on "ignite the fire" WNN
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