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Stars twinkle above overshadowed by the moon-- lovers hold their breath Two hearts are beating together like they are one moonlight on her face He takes her hand falls to bended knee Will his ring outshine the moon? Entry for Francine Rober's Moon Contest

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Date: 2/17/2013 1:16:00 AM
Congrats Richard and thanks for pointing out my mistake....
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Date: 2/16/2013 11:26:00 PM
Big congratulations again for another great write and super win my dear friend Richard! Cheers! love/hugs, Leonora
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/17/2013 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Leonora
Date: 2/16/2013 11:08:00 PM
It's so neat to finally see all the entries together on the list. Yours is great, Richard. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/16/2013 11:06:00 PM
many congrats on your win with this romantic entry Richard
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Date: 2/16/2013 5:10:00 PM
Congrats Richard on another win. Connie
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2013 5:26:00 PM
Thank Connie
Date: 2/16/2013 3:15:00 PM
Lovely moon imagery. Congratulations, nicely done. -Jeremy
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2013 3:17:00 PM
Thanks Jeremy, I appreciate the visit and comment.
Date: 2/16/2013 1:53:00 PM
Richard, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2013 2:56:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 1/31/2013 3:05:00 AM
Nice! Romance is in the air - stars, moonlight -Makes you go -I hope so. Never stop penning Richard! You paint a better world.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2013 2:57:00 PM
Thanks Vicky
Date: 1/30/2013 9:46:00 PM
AWESOME!!!!!! :) How romantic! Well, will his dream come true??? ;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2013 2:57:00 PM
Thanks Eileen

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