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Moon-Pearled Rose

when maple sun melts along orange ice of dusk brisk-ballet shall breathe in pale love's snowy scents for - I'm your midnight's moon-pearled rose...

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/29/2023 2:58:00 AM

Back with heartfelt wishes! Congratulations. Well deserved

Debjani Mitra

Date: 10/28/2023 7:20:00 PM

Aha...what a beauty this is, Hiya your choice of words and thoughts are so powerful, Keep creating such moon pearled rosy verses.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2023 10:08:00 AM

I loved reading these beautiful lines. Congrats

Paige Hind

Date: 10/23/2023 4:46:00 PM

Beautifully written indeed. A pleasure to read!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/22/2023 5:09:00 PM

A beautiful Tanka Hiya, love that last line it’s exquisite… Belle

Arastu Goyal

Date: 10/20/2023 7:31:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this, I like the metaphors :-) Good work!-AG

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 10/19/2023 4:41:00 PM

Very lovely romance! Have a sweet day lovely Hiya :-) best regards and warmest wishes, AA

Deb M

Date: 10/19/2023 2:33:00 PM

Exquisite Poem Hiya….the last line is simply beautiful! Debx

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/18/2023 9:19:00 PM

Very romantic -- love should entertain all of our senses -- color, taste, scent and spirit. Excellent poetry!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/18/2023 9:00:00 PM

Dreamy last line Hiya ...

Valsa George

Date: 10/18/2023 8:51:00 PM

I never knew a tanka can be made so beautiful. Excellent diction ! Beautiful torrent of images.

Karen Jones

Date: 10/18/2023 7:59:00 PM

This is like poetic chocolate cake so sweet and decadent in the best ways. I love the word choice...moon pearled and melting sun. Ah so good it's yummy. Lol

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/18/2023 4:26:00 PM

Your tanka is brimming with breathtaking imagery. The way you carefully choose your words and employ metaphors is truly masterful. Best of luck in the contest; your talent deserves to be recognized.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/18/2023 9:30:00 AM

Love the imagery in your poem, maple sun melts ( I picture syrup melting over the horizon.)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/18/2023 9:01:00 AM

Your alliteration made this a grand poem. Blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/18/2023 6:54:00 AM

Fabulous as always, Hiya--ornate vocabulary!

Arastu Goyal

Date: 10/18/2023 6:27:00 AM

Nice imagery, I really enjoyed reading this and the words you used here. Nice and clever write :-) -AG

Silent One

Date: 10/18/2023 5:58:00 AM

Lovely imagery in your tanka..Your selection of words and use of metaphor are very nice.. Good luck in the contest..

Ink Empress

Date: 10/18/2023 5:05:00 AM

Ive run out of enough words to describe how beautiful this tanka is my angelic star! I love the descriptive diction, the autumnal imagery and flow of your tanka. Your use of colors and that opening line too “ when maple sun melts” ahh my heart! And also how you’ve written “ pale loves snowy scent” your use of alliterations and the way you’ve paired words is impeccable! And guess wats my fave line “ im your midnight moon pearled rose” wow! Just wow! Pls set it as a prompt on insta! So i can use!

Ink Empress
Date: 10/18/2023 5:06:00 AM

Goodluck for the contest! You’ve nailed it. So heartfelt and touching this is. Fave for sure