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Moon-Pearled Rose

when maple sun melts
along orange ice of dusk
brisk-ballet shall breathe
in pale love's snowy scents for -
I'm your midnight's moon-pearled rose...

Copyright © Hiya Sharma | Year Posted 2023

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Ink Empress Date: 10/29/2023 2:58:00 AM Back with heartfelt wishes! Congratulations. Well deserved Login to Reply

Debjani Mitra Date: 10/28/2023 7:20:00 PM Aha...what a beauty this is, Hiya your choice of words and thoughts are so powerful, Keep creating such moon pearled rosy verses. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/28/2023 10:08:00 AM I loved reading these beautiful lines. Congrats Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 10/23/2023 4:46:00 PM Beautifully written indeed. A pleasure to read! Login to Reply

Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/22/2023 5:09:00 PM A beautiful Tanka Hiya, love that last line it’s exquisite… Belle Login to Reply

Arastu Goyal Date: 10/20/2023 7:31:00 AM Enjoyed reading this, I like the metaphors :-) Good work!-AG Login to Reply

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 10/19/2023 4:41:00 PM Very lovely romance! Have a sweet day lovely Hiya :-) best regards and warmest wishes, AA Login to Reply

Deb M Date: 10/19/2023 2:33:00 PM Exquisite Poem Hiya….the last line is simply beautiful! Debx Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 10/18/2023 9:19:00 PM Very romantic -- love should entertain all of our senses -- color, taste, scent and spirit. Excellent poetry! Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 10/18/2023 9:00:00 PM Dreamy last line Hiya ... Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 10/18/2023 8:51:00 PM I never knew a tanka can be made so beautiful. Excellent diction ! Beautiful torrent of images. Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 10/18/2023 7:59:00 PM This is like poetic chocolate cake so sweet and decadent in the best ways. I love the word choice...moon pearled and melting sun. Ah so good it's yummy. Lol Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 10/18/2023 4:26:00 PM Your tanka is brimming with breathtaking imagery. The way you carefully choose your words and employ metaphors is truly masterful. Best of luck in the contest; your talent deserves to be recognized. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 10/18/2023 9:30:00 AM Love the imagery in your poem, maple sun melts ( I picture syrup melting over the horizon.) Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/18/2023 9:01:00 AM Your alliteration made this a grand poem. Blessings. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/18/2023 6:54:00 AM Fabulous as always, Hiya--ornate vocabulary! Login to Reply

Arastu Goyal Date: 10/18/2023 6:27:00 AM Nice imagery, I really enjoyed reading this and the words you used here. Nice and clever write :-) -AG Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 10/18/2023 5:58:00 AM Lovely imagery in your tanka..Your selection of words and use of metaphor are very nice.. Good luck in the contest.. Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 10/18/2023 5:05:00 AM Ive run out of enough words to describe how beautiful this tanka is my angelic star! I love the descriptive diction, the autumnal imagery and flow of your tanka. Your use of colors and that opening line too “ when maple sun melts” ahh my heart! And also how you’ve written “ pale loves snowy scent” your use of alliterations and the way you’ve paired words is impeccable! And guess wats my fave line “ im your midnight moon pearled rose” wow! Just wow! Pls set it as a prompt on insta! So i can use! Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 10/18/2023 5:06:00 AM Goodluck for the contest! You’ve nailed it. So heartfelt and touching this is. Fave for sure