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Mood

Mood Tonight, I watched my kids. They were playing, And sometimes fighting. So, I am writing This thought This note. Without sound, I had asked How their future will be? Will they be secured? I want for them good life and mode But they have to strive That's life! Have I done what I should? Have I given up what I should? Or should not!? I was watching the youngest kid Two years old She can walk She can talk I do not know how to describe my mood It was not happy neither was sad It was not soft neither was hard It was not good neither was bad

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Wardah Ahmed

Date: 7/24/2024 11:20:00 PM

Our moods are up and down and sometimes we will wonder if we did enough for our children. We always hoe for the best. This was a delightful poem to read. Wardah.

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 7/27/2024 5:16:00 AM

Thank you dear Wardah! Agreed :-) Best wishes & hopes!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/13/2023 5:25:00 PM

You are blessed to have children. And will always question that I do the right thing.. or… have I done enough. My daughter is grown with a grandson and I asked myself the same questionS. Isn’t that odd?. Pangie

Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 12/14/2023 2:48:00 PM

I think so, and I think that is a nice odd! Thank you very much dear lovely Panagiota Romios :-) With best regards & wishes ~ AA