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Monster of the Ness

Southwest of Inverness A stretch of water called "Loch Ness" It runs along The Great Glen Fault Freshwater deep, not a tinge of salt But this legendary loch Has a secret to share In its murky depths Is their a monsters lair? St Columbus is believed to have seen The traits of this monster, in its particular mean The place where he stayed, the locals in mourn A swimmer chased by this water born Dragged to the deep of this peat stained loch A family now mourn their loss An aid of the Saint, on his masters so Enters the loch, as he swims with the flow Not long in, something chases his wake His master rises and with a cross he makes Go no further Do not touch the man Go back at once From that lair you come The beast recedes like natures tide This Saintly man had him cast aside In our modern world 1934 The monster again came to the fore This time captured on film Is it a her, or is it a him All i can say is we leave it alone Its the lochs monster so let it roam If it does exist, its for natures bless This awesome of beasts Monster of the Ness http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/scotland.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/13/2009 3:36:00 PM
I so believe that Nessie exists and we should let her/him alone. Again, your poems awaken the imagination in me. May Nessie live on forever if only in your words. Melody?
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Date: 5/2/2009 7:05:00 PM
James, I'm visitng friends and wanted to share this poem with them. They love it, too!
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Date: 4/27/2009 8:21:00 PM
Very nice story and poem. Took me to the edge of the water wanting to catch a glimpse of Nessie.
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Date: 4/26/2009 8:13:00 PM
I love this legend and your write surely does it justice. I want to see it! BG
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:58:00 PM
I love this piece..the legend of the loch ness is something that always fascinates me.
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:46:00 PM
i love the monster of the NESS and i love INVERNESS too ,a lovely place to live in with beautiful sceeneries,and scottish people so warm and friendly,the myth of lochness-100points for this one,well written,detailed too,and gave me the feeling to visit there soon---charma
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:45:00 PM
Oh my God, James. Awesome write. I'm going to send you a soup mail shortly. Thanks for posting this! Love, Carolyn
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