Monster of the Ness

Southwest of Inverness
A stretch of water called "Loch Ness"
It runs along The Great Glen Fault
Freshwater deep, not a tinge of salt
 
But this legendary loch
Has a secret to share
In its murky depths
Is their a monsters lair?

St Columbus is believed to have seen
The traits of this monster, in its particular mean
The place where he stayed, the locals in mourn
A swimmer chased by this water born

Dragged to the deep of this peat stained loch
A family now mourn their loss
An aid of the Saint, on his masters so
Enters the loch, as he swims with the flow
Not long in, something chases his wake
His master rises and with a cross he makes

Go no further
Do not touch the man
Go back at once
From that lair you come
The beast recedes like natures tide
This Saintly man had him cast aside

In our modern world 1934
The monster again came to the fore
This time captured on film
Is it a her, or is it a him

All i can say is we leave it alone
Its the lochs monster so let it roam
If it does exist, its for natures bless
This awesome of beasts
Monster of the Ness


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Coster Avatar
June 13, 2009 at 3:36 PM
I so believe that Nessie exists and we should let her/him alone. Again, your poems awaken the imagination in me. May Nessie live on forever if only in your words. Melody?
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May 2, 2009 at 7:05 PM
James, I'm visitng friends and wanted to share this poem with them. They love it, too!
Pate Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 8:21 PM
Very nice story and poem. Took me to the edge of the water wanting to catch a glimpse of Nessie.
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April 26, 2009 at 8:13 PM
I love this legend and your write surely does it justice. I want to see it! BG
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April 26, 2009 at 1:58 PM
I love this piece..the legend of the loch ness is something that always fascinates me.
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April 26, 2009 at 1:46 PM
i love the monster of the NESS and i love INVERNESS too ,a lovely place to live in with beautiful sceeneries,and scottish people so warm and friendly,the myth of lochness-100points for this one,well written,detailed too,and gave me the feeling to visit there soon---charma
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April 26, 2009 at 1:45 PM
Oh my God, James. Awesome write. I'm going to send you a soup mail shortly. Thanks for posting this! Love, Carolyn
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