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Monorhyme - Oh So Beautiful

I asked her softly if she would stay the night She answered that it was wrong but it felt right She's oh so beautiful in the morning light 10-29-18 For Broken Wings' contest Three Lines

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Date: 11/5/2018 5:47:00 AM
Aww how romantic! Many congratulations on your win Larry, :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/13/2018 7:37:00 AM
Thank you, Jan
Date: 11/3/2018 12:31:00 PM
Larry , congratulations on your win in my contest ~
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/13/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thank you...interesting challenge!
Date: 11/3/2018 12:19:00 PM
Wonderful lines! Congratulations on your win :) xomo
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/13/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen
Date: 11/2/2018 2:22:00 AM
- Oh ... romantic, Larry :) - Congratulations on a great win - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/13/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thank you SS
Date: 11/1/2018 8:15:00 PM
Sweet and melodious. Congrats on your awesome win
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/13/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea

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