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in silence I float drifting deep in solitude- then I fall awake . . . __________________________ February 3, 2016 Poetry/Monoku/solitude Copyright Protected, ID 16-751-974-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Entered in the contest, Monoku #4 sponsor, Poet Destroyer Fourth Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/10/2016 12:40:00 PM

Happy cheers

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/10/2016 11:31:00 AM

It was a great entry. Thank you for trying my contest

Constance La France
Date: 2/10/2016 12:01:00 PM

Linda, thanks for much for my placement, I am honored !

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/10/2016 10:54:00 AM

Beautiful monoku and wish you congratulation my lovely friend on your win. Loved always,bl

Constance La France
Date: 2/10/2016 12:02:00 PM

BL, thanks for the congratulations and the love !!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/9/2016 5:29:00 PM

Broken, Congratulations On your win. I truly enjoyed every entry placed on my Solitude list. Stop by my latest blog "Silence Ululates" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Constance La France
Date: 2/9/2016 7:59:00 PM

Linda, thanks so much for the placement in your contest, I am honored ~

Paul Callus

Date: 2/9/2016 3:42:00 PM

Truly a beauty, Constance! The end part is great. Congrats on a merited win! // paul

Constance La France
Date: 2/9/2016 8:00:00 PM

Paul, thanks for the congrats and the compliment ~

White Sage

Date: 2/7/2016 5:50:00 PM

excellent monoku there BW, well penned...

Constance La France
Date: 2/7/2016 6:02:00 PM

Sage, thanks for visiting and the excellent ~

James Inman

Date: 2/4/2016 8:34:00 PM

Very clever wording, PD.

Constance La France
Date: 2/5/2016 9:38:00 AM

James, I do love that word clever, thanks for visiting ~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2016 3:25:00 PM

ooh, VERY cool last phrase: fall awake!!! Love that, Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2016 6:19:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for visiting and for the love !

Jill Spagnola

Date: 2/4/2016 9:19:00 AM

Constance, which came first the photo or the poem? I adore them both...your write reminds me of Alice, falling down the rabbit hole...Excellent Stuff! :), jill

Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2016 1:35:00 PM

Jill, actually the image came first, I do find that images will help me when writing, thank you for that lovely comment and of course for the excellent ~~

Eric Boddie

Date: 2/4/2016 8:14:00 AM

I fall awake sounds like you bake and not biscuits or crapes, just that good space cake, but I think you said you don't smoke which is great because if you don't, it's more for my sake....lol....much enjoyed bw....;)

Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2016 1:39:00 PM

Eric, have you never been in sweet solitude, all dreamy and suddenly come to reality, this is where my phrase fall awake was meant to describe ... I am sure you have... thank for visiting and the forever support...;)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/4/2016 8:02:00 AM

Your words are therapy. You take me to a wonderful place constancely. So, just be here and do your thing. You let me look upon my own sorrows and life knowing I am not alone in my focus. It is such a comfort. What a wonderful writer you are! Yes, take joy in the way you affect me and others because your perspective and wit are simply beautiful.

Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2016 8:11:00 AM

Duke, thank you for the lovely comment and the compliment and the beautiful, you are a very special man ~

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/4/2016 2:17:00 AM

Awesome! CayCay

Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2016 8:12:00 AM

CayCay, thanks for visiting my poem and gosh I love that word awesome ~

Judy Konos

Date: 2/3/2016 11:15:00 PM

Girl look at you! You just had to come up with a mind blower! Congrats...topped off with WoW Whee

Constance La France
Date: 2/4/2016 8:14:00 AM

Judy, thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment, my muse has been on fire lately ~