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along the dawn sand... a great cold wind blows wildly- sea birds rise on air __________________________ December 29, 2017 Poetry/Monoku/air Copyright Protected, ID 17-977682 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Monoku 3: fire,earth, water, and air/ Theme chosen - air sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 1/4/2018 10:44:00 PM
Wonderful Monoku, Constance - Happy New Year and congratulations on your win, my friend - well-deserved! :-)
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Date: 1/3/2018 12:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings, great monoku. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/2/2018 1:18:00 PM
Back with congrats on your fine win Broken Wings ~Susan
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Date: 1/2/2018 10:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Beautiful imagery.
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Date: 1/2/2018 1:04:00 AM
Congratulations n your win, BW.
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Date: 1/1/2018 5:37:00 PM
Congratulations BW on your placement!! I saw this very monoku in reality this morning :) Nicely penned!! Best, Judy
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Date: 1/1/2018 5:07:00 PM
Congratulations, Constance, on your second place! Its a beautiful write.
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Date: 1/1/2018 3:39:00 PM
this is most picturesque, Constance. I love it. Congrats on your win. Happy New year 2018 to you, dear.
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Date: 1/1/2018 12:55:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/1/2018 12:27:00 PM
Great one liner Constance..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 12/30/2017 11:11:00 AM
Well-done, Constance! Janice
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Date: 12/30/2017 7:47:00 AM
Beautiful imagery..great monoku..best for a win BW.
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Date: 12/30/2017 5:01:00 AM
Great monoku, Constance:)
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Date: 12/29/2017 10:33:00 PM
My best guess it's either that or drown, couldn't resist, just kidding, lovely write BW, best wishes...
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Date: 12/29/2017 6:55:00 PM
Fantastic imagery Broken Wings. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/29/2017 6:06:00 PM
hide the french fries....hide the french fries.....Sorry....we have seagulls squadrons that attack those carrying french fries to their blankets...
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