Moments of Awareness(Erlebnis)

A leaf blown in the air- whispered words to share of pictures in my mind or scriptures I find

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Jim Wilson

Date: 3/20/2009 12:17:00 PM

Beautiful, a enjoyed the way you used rhyme in both the first and second parts, it gives the poem a lyrical quality. Thanks.

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/20/2009 10:41:00 AM

Like the title, this poem is capturing. beautiful, Brian! One of my favs. Thank you for your kind thoughts. Love, Robin

Derrick Burton

Date: 3/20/2009 10:37:00 AM

Simple and powerful, enjoyed the calm lesson of it all. Have a blessed day.

David Smalling

Date: 3/20/2009 9:42:00 AM

Thank you, Brian. I have nor love nor joy, but like a slave impelled by what I do not know, in those words I let my inside out. Your poem on the hand has certain pointing to hope and consolation. Thank you, God bless.

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/20/2009 6:36:00 AM

I love the breezy feel of this uplifting reminder, it brings about a feeling that God is in nature, and we are always surrounded by the beauty of that truth. Lovely poem...Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/20/2009 5:50:00 AM

Nature can be deeply spiritual. There are moments...and you have captured one in words. Too beautiful all that this infers. Love, shar

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/20/2009 4:09:00 AM

What does the term in bracket means? That inspires my curiousity (laugh). I applaud your steadfast faith, as consistent as your marvelous writes. Keep the faith, Brian, more love.

Diane Christian

Date: 3/20/2009 3:40:00 AM

this is so beautiful Brian, its wonderful when God gives us scriptures, its so amazing, God bless from diane

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 3/20/2009 3:22:00 AM

This is a magnificent thought you have coined. really uplifting first thing in the morning. It reminds me a little of the haiku idea, of catching a moment in time. I'm off to a writer's weekend now and this piece is a great start. Regards: Déirdre

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/20/2009 1:48:00 AM

What a gorgeous image, and message of truth, a wonderful way to start the day. love, Kristin

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/20/2009 1:34:00 AM

THis is absolutely beautiful. I reread it several times to drink it in totally. Very nice Brian.