Momento on the Moon

They say it’s no bigger than a helmet, 
 Half-sunk in moondust, beside a crater’s lip— 
 A sculpture of a child's hand, reaching 
 upward, fingers curled mid-gesture, 
 as if to catch a star that isn’t falling. 

Polished titanium, etched with breath— 
 yes, breath—frozen in time: 
 a woman’s exhale as she said goodbye 
 to the capsule’s cold silence. 
 Her lover’s ring embedded in the wrist. 

Behind it, a glass cube holds 
 a feather from Earth’s last eagle, 
 a photograph of clouds, 
 and a tape that plays a lullaby 
 in a language no longer spoken. 

Lunar shadows shift across it slowly, 
 like the memory of someone walking away. 
 No plaque, no flag— 
 just silence holding its breath 
 while Earth hangs blue and distant above. 

And sometimes, in solar flare storms, 
 the sculpture hums faintly— 
 not by design, 
 but by yearning. 

They call it Momento: 
 Not monument, not marker— 
 Just a whisper left behind 
 for the stars to one day understand 
 that we were here— 
 and we remembered.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 4/21/2025 12:19:00 PM
This is a brilliant write and description is so precise!! The feelings and the choice of words are mesmerising!! words in a language no longer spoken- puts it at some future point in history when mankind has largely gone or diminished! Love this write!! Jay, all the best to you!
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Date: 4/11/2025 9:30:00 PM
"Lunar shadows shift across it slowly, like the memory of someone walking away. No plaque, no flag— just silence holding its breath ".... beautiful lines. Definitely your poems will leave a sweet whisper behind, even after your going.
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Date: 4/11/2025 6:36:00 PM
You and your lovely poems will always be remembered by me Jay, and so many others.
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Date: 4/11/2025 6:28:00 PM
Jay, you have expressed everything so well in detail. Best wishes for the contest!
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Date: 4/10/2025 12:14:00 PM
Whew, this contest is going quickly, I'd best get started! Good luck
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Jay Narain
Date: 4/10/2025 1:08:00 PM
Hi Anaya. I do not enter any contest these days. I just get a subject to write on from the contests. GlL in your entries.
Date: 4/10/2025 10:39:00 AM
- Beautifully described in great detail, Jay ... "Not monument, not marker — "your poems will always remind us of your poetic journey here on earth :) - hugs
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