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Molly

Let me tell you a story about Molly . . . Molly lived down the street from our house since I was a child, she was a very friendly and kind lady who befriended my mother; oh, there were many days of tea in the backyard or in our kitchen, she loved to talk and tell us stories of where she grew up- England. She and her husband had one son but she told me she wanted a girl, maybe that is why she took a liking to me and I liked her a lot too; I spent lots of time in her home looking at albums and looking at stuff, she always gave me cookies and milk and a kiss and hug. Her husband died suddenly- looking up at the sky he fell dead, of course, she was very sad after and her son was living out of town; I went to visit her often and she would tell me how she met her husband, she told all kinds of stories of their adventures together, it was love. I never thought of Molly as being old but I guess she was elderly, because not long after her husband died she was put in a nursing home; the house was sold quickly and her things were given to charity, I found that cruel- all those years of collecting, all those treasures gone. Well, I heard recently that Molly had died in the nursing home, a few years ago I visited her there but she did not know who I was; I don't even know where she is buried so I can bring her flowers, Molly loved flowers, I wonder if her son knew that . . . ____________________________ March 21, 2020 Poetry/Narrative/Molly Copyright Protected, ID 20-1238-084-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France NA in the contest, The Lady Down the Lane, Judged 4/11/2020 Submitted to the Premier contest, Final Call Of NAs Your Most Meaningful One sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke Second Place

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Date: 10/9/2020 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a story/write. I love your line, "she always gave me cookies and milk and a kiss and hug." For 2 years, I lived where a lady did this for me. She was a great friend. We moved and I never saw her again. Enjoy your wonderful win and day............
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Constance La France
Date: 10/9/2020 10:41:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and compliment, yes, many wonderful special people come into our life's and leave footprints on our soul _Constance
Date: 10/9/2020 2:43:00 AM
A beautiful write Constance, reading some of these entries I cant believe they were n/a' d first time round. Congrats on your win Tom
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Constance La France
Date: 10/9/2020 10:42:00 AM
Tom, thank you for the congrats and the beautiful, I know what you mean, I can never understand it either _Constance
Date: 10/8/2020 5:15:00 PM
Your wistful poem is so moving, Constance. The close relationship with Molly is expressed with much love but the distanced relationship between mother and son was such a loss for both of them. Captivating poetry. Congratulations on your excellent win.. ~Susan
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Constance La France
Date: 10/9/2020 10:45:00 AM
Susan, thank you for the nice comment and congratulations, I know what you mean, I was heartbroken to see the photo albums she treasured tossed in the garbage and her tossed in a nursing home to wither away alone _Constance
Date: 3/22/2020 8:00:00 AM
Beautifully done; a story that has a fantastic moral. I took note of that.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/22/2020 10:13:00 AM
Caren, thanks for the beautiful and for being able to read and see the message within my words _Constance

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