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Molestation

buds open at night like the stars on a clear sky~ bees come to molest dandy butterflies land on bunches of flowers~ kissing each in turn claws of predators dig deep into the soft flesh~ audacious abuse dark assaults the light white clouds scurry in great fear~ gross molestation Dec.1.2022 A Brian Strand Choice Hiku, Footle,Tanka, Clerihew Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/12/2022 7:51:00 AM
Great imagery on nature's molestation my dear friend Valsa. Congratulations on your win and this brilliant chain of nature's haiku! Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the read. God bless you always and your writings. hugs
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Date: 12/11/2022 7:35:00 PM
back with my congrats on this enjoyable haiku set
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Date: 12/11/2022 12:02:00 PM
EXCELLENT, Valsa. CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 12/11/2022 7:48:00 AM
Way to go with this winner in Brian's contest. Congratulations. Sara
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Date: 12/11/2022 7:42:00 AM
Clever one Valsa. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 12/11/2022 7:41:00 AM
Very entertaining! Congratulations dear friend.
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Date: 12/11/2022 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations. An interesting approach to molestation, Dear Valsa.
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Date: 12/11/2022 6:16:00 AM
Terrible word and concept. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/2/2022 6:27:00 AM
I like this, dear Valsa! It made me smile!
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Date: 12/1/2022 8:33:00 PM
Interesting take on 'molestation.' Never would have 'thunk' it!
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Date: 12/1/2022 2:29:00 PM
two sides of the silver coin, still nature is spent,
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Date: 12/1/2022 1:22:00 PM
Incredible use of imagery Valsa. The natural world inspires a lot of beautiful artwork. This is how things work; it's exciting to see. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 12/1/2022 1:12:00 PM
very interesting take on the idea of bees in nature. All the best in the contest, Valsa.
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Date: 12/1/2022 11:58:00 AM
What a profound sensation of both light and darkness beautiful simply beautiful!
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Date: 12/1/2022 6:14:00 AM
Great images of nature's darker side. Best to you, Valsa.
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Date: 12/1/2022 3:09:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for Brian's contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Karter is better now, and he is to come here today with his mom and probably his little niece (Ha!!Ha!!) and then on Monday by himself to spend the day with us. Sara
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Date: 12/1/2022 1:25:00 AM
- Lovely haiku, Valsa :) - Good luck in the contest :) -
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Valsa George
Date: 12/1/2022 2:52:00 AM
Much gratitude to you dear Smile. Love and hugs !
Date: 12/1/2022 1:00:00 AM
Subtle, delightful, enjoyed
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Valsa George
Date: 12/1/2022 2:51:00 AM
Thanks a lot Seeker friend !
Date: 12/1/2022 12:13:00 AM
Great string of haiku Valsa, haiku although short say so much. good luck in the contest. Tom
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Valsa George
Date: 12/1/2022 2:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Tom. Glad you liked my haikus !

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