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Molestation

buds open at night like the stars on a clear sky~ bees come to molest dandy butterflies land on bunches of flowers~ kissing each in turn claws of predators dig deep into the soft flesh~ audacious abuse dark assaults the light white clouds scurry in great fear~ gross molestation Dec.1.2022 A Brian Strand Choice Hiku, Footle,Tanka, Clerihew Poetry Contest

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Len Gasun

Date: 12/12/2022 7:51:00 AM

Great imagery on nature's molestation my dear friend Valsa. Congratulations on your win and this brilliant chain of nature's haiku! Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the read. God bless you always and your writings. hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/11/2022 7:35:00 PM

back with my congrats on this enjoyable haiku set

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/11/2022 12:02:00 PM

EXCELLENT, Valsa. CONGRATS! Janice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/11/2022 7:48:00 AM

Way to go with this winner in Brian's contest. Congratulations. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/11/2022 7:42:00 AM

Clever one Valsa. Congratulations! :)

JCB Brul

Date: 12/11/2022 7:41:00 AM

Very entertaining! Congratulations dear friend.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 12/11/2022 6:27:00 AM

Congratulations. An interesting approach to molestation, Dear Valsa.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/11/2022 6:16:00 AM

Terrible word and concept. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/2/2022 6:27:00 AM

I like this, dear Valsa! It made me smile!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/1/2022 8:33:00 PM

Interesting take on 'molestation.' Never would have 'thunk' it!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/1/2022 2:29:00 PM

two sides of the silver coin, still nature is spent,

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/1/2022 1:22:00 PM

Incredible use of imagery Valsa. The natural world inspires a lot of beautiful artwork. This is how things work; it's exciting to see. Good luck with the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2022 1:12:00 PM

very interesting take on the idea of bees in nature. All the best in the contest, Valsa.

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 12/1/2022 11:58:00 AM

What a profound sensation of both light and darkness beautiful simply beautiful!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/1/2022 6:14:00 AM

Great images of nature's darker side. Best to you, Valsa.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2022 3:09:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for Brian's contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Karter is better now, and he is to come here today with his mom and probably his little niece (Ha!!Ha!!) and then on Monday by himself to spend the day with us. Sara