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Modification of Time

In the faint blue night That is start of ominous There is a rough scene one twisted time frame Neither day nor night counts here. These few times are here It seems to have bump to ours Trice of adjustment before night quite covers all and sun sets on our stay here. Written : June 14, 2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsered by Brian strand contest

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/16/2022 10:13:00 PM

Twixt day and night strange tings may happen.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/15/2022 1:58:00 PM

Your "Modification of Time" is a wonderful Tanka write. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/15/2022 11:58:00 AM

Dawning of morning, day, setting of evening and dusk, night - each one blending into each other in a modification of time - none on their own have meaning, but as they spill into one another a breathtaking sequence of a 24 hour cycle on planet earth. Was spell bound by this poem Lasaad. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/15/2022 6:00:00 AM

Something special about this time frame you convey--neither day nor night counts here... I feel the depth of your write.

Valsa George

Date: 6/15/2022 5:48:00 AM

Great tanka.... ! Hope you are enjoying your cruise, dear friend !

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/15/2022 5:01:00 AM

Like Connie I too thought of the twilight zone, hope you are having a great time Lasaad. Tom

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/14/2022 11:41:00 PM

It sounds a little like the twilight zone to me Sotto. The Twilight Zone was a television show in Black and white that aired from 1959 to 1964. Strange happenings lured the audience in every week. I enjoyed your poem my friend. Blessings xxoo

Bill Baker

Date: 6/14/2022 3:57:00 PM

Intriguing Tanka, Sotto Poet. I enjoyed the read and the thoughts it brought to my mind. Hope you trip went well or is going well. Bill