Mission Revisited

a fable

With rake in hand, I had a mission clear -
to rid my yard of piles of rotting leaves
before their musty smell got out of hand.

My ancient oak trees are prolific still.
Providing fruit and leaves with great success,
both shed in full abundance ev'ry year.

One wicked swipe of weaponry I thought
revealed a broken bottle nonetheless
it was instead a lens, a spyglass lost.

I picked it up, discov'ring life anew -
its closer focus found a seedling rare
had sprouted, taking root within the loam. 

What I had thought was useless held a prize,
All winter long the dying leaves had giv'n 
a careful shelter for one special seed.

I took my weapon back and in the shed
I found a cage-of-sorts that fit my plan.
The moral here, don't be so quick to clean
what nature has provided as a shield.

November 5, 2016
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December 3, 2016 at 4:53 AM
So nice, a young, growing out of old, all new: a shoot... Good luck in the contest.
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December 3, 2016 at 5:17 PM
Thank you, Darren, Appreciate the good wishes and the comment. I had not made the connection, a new shoot with the title contest, Shooting Blank Verse. How very perceptive of you.
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November 6, 2016 at 5:11 AM
Metaphorically nice ... Enjoyed reading your poem ...
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November 6, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Thank you Probir, perhaps it is the iambic rhythm which helps the reading to be more enjoyable. Appreciate the encouragement.
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November 5, 2016 at 9:43 PM
True and profound beauty. You're a talented poet. Keep writing.
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November 6, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Thanks, Christy, I wrote it and then revised it to use iambic pentameter. Surprisingly it only required the use of a thesaurus to find some suitable synonyms.
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