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Mission

I dug a huge momentum out of the ground so big it made grooves in my back and lanes in my feet and people watched and shouted approval, some clapped, I staggered under its weight and did not see who I passed just moving without buckling along streets painted yellow and gold heading to where I thought the gods might dwell, hoping to catch them in; busy, I suspected, from burying momentums

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Date: 2/26/2024 5:26:00 PM
mission accomplished with your words. I liked 'moving without buckling along streets painted yellow an gold...the gods might dwell. Almost surreal in nature.
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 2/26/2024 11:24:00 PM
Thanks Sara

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