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Missing You

has anybody seen my friend phylis it was like i looked around to count my kids and one of them was gone i tried looking here and there but i cant find her anywhere has anybody seen my girl phylis i'm posting her picture on all the post in town hoping just hoping my best friend can be found has anybody seen my darling phylis did she run away or did someone take her from me did i do something to make her flee if i did, woe is me, woe is me. has anybody seen phylis my missing child if i don't find her i think i'll just go wild

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/3/2009 1:39:00 PM
this is nice-im glad i came to read this-hope they found your phyllis and dont go wild,sweet poetry,just sweet;-)charma
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Date: 4/15/2009 2:55:00 PM
wonderfully moving; I do so love your style.. Love and Light...LaBella
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Date: 4/13/2009 8:09:00 PM
Fine rendition of a tragic event. It is poetry like this that moves people. Keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/4/2009 7:41:00 PM
Great expression of desperation for loseing someone close,and the fear of not finding her, great job on this one...:) Alan
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Date: 2/28/2009 11:39:00 AM
i really love this poem you are very caring. and thank you for the comment on my poem Did You..-Elizabeth Lindsey
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Date: 2/24/2009 12:20:00 PM
wow-- pulled the heart here-- hope she is found ....
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Date: 2/18/2009 9:19:00 AM
Phyllis has been found. This missing girl did not intentionally run away, she did not flee. Her arm did heal and this missing child can type again. So watch out friends I am back on line to make up my time. Thanks for missing me John. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 2/15/2009 9:23:00 PM
An abscence as this is tragic, but hopefully you will find her very soon and your heart smiles again that wonderful glow :)
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Date: 2/15/2009 3:14:00 PM
I hope you find her, too. This is very sad and sincere. Best wishes, Sara:)
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Date: 2/14/2009 1:10:00 PM
This is sad, John. It is a lovely heartfelt write even if it is sad. I hope you find her! Love, Robin
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