Miss You

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An Andaree Form poem.

I miss our long talks on each bright afternoon, loving each moment, but gone too soon. With gay green eyes, smile aglow, you let your heart show. I miss you so then I flew, but want you to know I can't let your warm hugs go, your words so intimate, lost too soon. I miss our long talks on each bright afternoon. 03/22/16

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Moon Flower

Date: 4/26/2016 10:33:00 AM

I like the form you use here; perfect plus a great write. Excellent!

James Inman
Date: 4/26/2016 10:44:00 AM

This is a form developed by Andrea Dietrich. You should give it a try. It is not as simple as it seems. It is not posted in the forms tab but if you are interested let me know and I'll get the details for you or if you are in touch with Andrea, let her know.

James Inman
Date: 4/26/2016 10:40:00 AM

Thank you Moon.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/12/2016 4:29:00 AM

It is superb James. It is very interesting. If u will read from bottom it is giving the same meaning as it from top. So nice.~7~.........with love

James Inman
Date: 4/12/2016 7:26:00 PM

Thanks Manmath.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2016 8:56:00 PM

OMG, I just realized you did an Andaree. WOW. Thanks for trying my form for this poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2016 8:55:00 PM

thanks for visiting me today. Hope you had a great weekend. I sure did.

Constance La France

Date: 4/5/2016 2:27:00 AM

James, so sweet and romantic, I am loving this 7 ~

Susan Palli

Date: 4/3/2016 1:17:00 PM

Clever with much heartfelt affection! Love it!

James Inman
Date: 4/3/2016 1:27:00 PM

Thank you Susan, sorry about the reply mix up. I posted my reply to Connie just after you posted your comment and it went to the wrong place. Thank you again.