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a short, romance, reality check 

The stars always shine but we must turn from the sun to see them. I existed not knowing - misdirection’s patsy - I couldn't spot the bluff. Empty looking seas are full of trash and spring waters are full of plastic. I thought I had measured and understood you but nothing’s what it seems Seduced by illusions, I couldn’t wait to see you - now I hardly think of you. You're a childhood lesson, a chalkboard memory, erased and forgotten.

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Date: 7/3/2020 10:28:00 PM
That last line is assertive and powerful.
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Date: 7/4/2020 4:29:00 PM
Thank you =]

Book: Shattered Sighs