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Misfit

I tried so desperately to fit in, I wanted to belong. I often felt like a misfit or an alien or something. One day I even asked my mom, if I was an alien. It sucks like hell not fitting in. On most days I wanted to crawl into giant hole and never return. Don’t get me wrong I was loved by mom, dad and my immediate family. If it wasn’t for them I would have built my own spaceship with my bare hands. But that all I changed when I met the “one”. He became my best friend, we were inseparable and joined at the hip. Until one day he came to me and said his family was moving. I was heartbroken and asked him if he could take me. I couldn’t bear becoming an alien and outcast again. He said don’t worry, and that he would find me when he became a man. I waited and waited and he never returned. Years later I was in the local grocery store, I noticed some one staring and following me from a far. I was on edge, I was about to whip out my mace. Until I realized that I recognized my stalker, I pushed everything aside and ran into my stalkers arms. 2-28-2020 Alexis Y.

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Date: 3/5/2020 4:30:00 AM
This is a beautiful story, Alexis, very nicely presented. I love a happy ending. Hugs, John
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Date: 3/1/2020 9:39:00 PM
I was impressed with this, Alexis - it held my attention and gave me an ending I didn't see coming - love it when that happens. It meant a great deal to me that your presence was one of the first I found on a poem after I was gone almost two months - in a big way seeing your comment confirmed I have a 'belonging' here such as it uniquely is. Thanks and a sold story poem ... CayCay
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Date: 3/2/2020 2:47:00 PM
Hi CayCay, That means a lot coming for you. I am so happy that you liked. The hopeless romantic in me just had to make this a love story. I’m glad you’re back:-) Alexis
Date: 2/29/2020 1:13:00 PM
Ha ha love this very much. always wanted to be abducted by Aliens. Love the twist well done my friend.
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Date: 2/29/2020 8:29:00 AM
Nice artful twist in this mesmerizing Lost-and-Found poem, Alexis! Very moving poetry. Yet better ... emotionally uplifting. An aurora bright write, dear friend. Love and hugs always.
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Date: 2/29/2020 7:49:00 AM
That was incredible! Absolutely amazing! I love it to the core. Thank you Great work
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Date: 2/29/2020 7:10:00 AM
Great storytelling Alexis with a good ending..
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Date: 2/29/2020 4:31:00 AM
What a delightful story so beautifully related dearest, Alexis! hugs xxx
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Date: 2/28/2020 8:22:00 PM
A fairy tale ending to your romantic lines Alexis. Tom
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Date: 2/28/2020 4:23:00 PM
What a fantastic story-poem. I love the ending!
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Date: 2/28/2020 2:06:00 PM
oh how romantic an ending Alexis and I love the sci fi feel to the poem and it would make a super short film!:-) hugs jan xx
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Alexis Y.
Date: 2/28/2020 2:10:00 PM
WoW! Jan, I loved your comment! Now all I need is a movie producer on board. I could up with the script (extended) in no time. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis
Date: 2/28/2020 11:57:00 AM
Everybody loves a happy ending:) Wonderful story, Alexis.
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Date: 2/28/2020 11:40:00 AM
What a wonderful story. Is it based on some truth? Since I got side effects from a nasty drug, i too have felt like an alien. But physically. I remember trying to fit in as a child. When I just stopped trying, that is when I flourished!
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Date: 2/28/2020 9:32:00 AM
What a great story. It brings to mind the song "I'll be Watching You". Hugs Rick
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Date: 2/28/2020 8:32:00 AM
- ... a happy ending ... you fit nicely into those arms, Alexis ... a lovely poem :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Alexis Y.
Date: 2/28/2020 2:12:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, I appreciate you being the first to comment on my poem. Thanks for supporting my writing endeavors:-) Alexis

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