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English Learner's Word of the Day: moonlit - Learner's Dictionary

I bid love's mirror fond adieu but saw it gazing back at you my face framed in your iris' flecked with gold ... I dared to press your lips to mine while yours were tasting hers, divine those crimson - yours, dark plum mine, parched and cold ... with cravings mixing mouths and flesh we danced a merge of limbs, enmeshed our feral, dark ambitions drowned and dire ... drunk with the wine of blood, taboo I poured my madness into two and still our manic meld was white-hot fire ... I dared that looking-glass reveal the way you split my heart to feel such yearning for the carnal cares of two ... when I would die for just one peck your perfect bows upon my neck and forfeit all I know for ONLY you ... why does it seem I'm ne'er enough just me ALONE - not 'double' stuff alas, to swim your source and make it mine ... these wispy women that we split keep you from being intimate yet that's the precious pearl I long to shine ... the mirror needs to meet my fist and shatter all that can't exist each shard, a cheek to press your tender breath ... just once I'd love to look your eyes no 'jeux de groupe', just my demise the bittersweet reflection ... of love's death. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Completely Your Choice (16) Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand Completely New (3) Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 11/2/2020 9:29:00 PM
The thoroughly enchanting poetic tropes cached herein leave one gasping for more. The imagery and allusion employed throughout the entire piece are simply unrivalled, to say the least...a sizzling opus that gradually works the unsuspecting reader into the persona's high-celsius, erotically microwaving artistic scintillations:-)
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Date: 10/10/2020 3:42:00 AM
Fantastic poetry my friend. Love and the human need for it is indeed a truly wonderful need and quest in life. Its death is a tragic and almost unbearable occurrence. Truly great poetry!! A fav...
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Date: 9/26/2020 8:34:00 PM
So profound, Greg. You are a master of eloquence and profundity. Did this one win with Brian? Let me know what contest it won because I see it got a top notch win. Good on you. Congratulations. Well, I dare see only two of your poems. I entered some contests and now I better hurry back upstairs!!
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Date: 9/26/2020 7:06:00 PM
Beautiful! Gregory...Many congrats on your top-notch win. ~ Elaine
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Date: 9/24/2020 7:14:00 PM
Wow! Two poems in one is an intriguing form I have not seen before. Very well done!
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Date: 9/23/2020 11:08:00 AM
Gorgeous poetry! Caught up in the love and lust and madness when really just lusting for the madness of a love.. is daringly expressed with metaphorical and emotional beauty, Greg. Awesome rhythm and rhymes. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/23/2020 8:44:00 AM
Lusty, lusty! You wrote this so well.
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