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Minichu - Fear

The void exists within All receptors alert, yet frozen in place Unscreaming There is held breath The wax like mask of your own face Near death Mistake Lost without trace Wake The void exists within The wax like mask of your own face Wake

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/11/2023 2:40:00 PM

Great one Di11y. Congratulations! :)

Karen Jones

Date: 10/7/2023 9:06:00 PM

CONGRATS on another win!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/7/2023 11:48:00 PM

Thanks Karen, appreciate your kind support

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/16/2023 1:43:00 PM

Excellent D !! Looks like the battle is on again! I see Seeker has posted a good one too. I would not like to be Mohan, choosing . He has also posted one, maybe he will just choose his own ?????? lol This one of yours is in depth creepy ! I really love it. Its really good. Be interesting to see what others come up with. BOL Cheers SV

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/16/2023 2:51:00 PM

Thanks SV - I'll take a look