Mind's Eye
I am paying tribute to Joe Bonamasso's song Mind's Eye
with my own inspired lyrics, this song is a jewel and Joe's haunting playing
on his Gibson guitar is like a light gleaming in the darkness, an escape !
~ And my lyrics go like this ~
Help me Jesus, find some peace
I am down down, plunging down
swirling in my pain, please hold my hand
before I fall, into the flames
I am so lost, sweet love decayed
time and space, is disappearing
I am haunted, I am haunted
hold me close Jesus, help me
before I fall, into the flames
I am down down, plunging down
time and space disappearing
there is no time
Rescue,
me and the rain is falling
falling hard on a long winding forgotten dark street
and there is no time, no time to reach me
Reaching,
a hidden bar
like a ray of light in the darkness reaching out
for my bruised soul and my scarred heart
Listen,
I hear a guitar riff
oh, I am haunted, I am haunted
hold me close, comfort me guitar
before I fall, fall into the flames
Help me,
cause I am going down, down
plunging out of control fast, as time and space
disappear, and the guitar is shredding and draws me in
On the stage,
a man and his guitar reach for me
descending into my head, it is sublime, magical
strong, chilling, powerful, emotional
Singing,
his rhythmic melodic voice soothes me
lingering in my brain, opening a door once closed
and I can see with my minds eye
I see,
the world falling, falling into nothing
can I help save it or is it too late for that
best I save myself, save myself first
and reach out, reach out to people
with my minds eye
Haunted by memories, all the closed doors
my blood is frozen, my journey too hard
can I save the world, and save myself
I am awake Jesus, with my minds eye
my minds eye
On the stage,
a man and his guitar reach for me
descending into my head, it is sublime, magical
strong, chilling, powerful, emotional
Singing,
his rhythmic melodic voice soothes me
lingering in my brain, opening a door once closed
and I can see through my minds eye
I see,
the world falling, falling into nothing
can I help save it or is it too late for that
best I save myself, save myself first
and reach out, reach out to people
keep my minds eye
Help me Jesus, find some peace
I am down down, plunging down
swirling in my pain, please hold my hand
before I fall, into the flames
I am so lost, sweet love decayed
time and space, is disappearing
I am haunted, I am haunted
hold me close Jesus, help me
before I fall, into the flames
I am down down, plunging down
time and space disappearing
there is no time left
Listen, stop speaking
there is no time left,
no time left
to save the world
to save myself and you
there is no time left
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May 17, 2023
Written for the contest, Joe Bonamassa Inspiration 5
sponsor, Robert James Liguori
Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2023
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