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Millicent

Millicent, hair of sunlight and cinnamon, soft skin, powder scent, freckles, rosy cheeks, and fleeting amusement. Behind curtains and furniture, chased by the hound in waves of laughter she runs round and round, hound coming after. A faithful hound, her constant companion, lingers in a questionable expression, he raise his ears and cocked his head as he hears his name as a participant. Millicent wrinkles her nose; her little lips began to quiver, tears pool in her eyes soon shimmer evanescent, a face of pure innocence. In the corner Millicent sits, a faithful hound beside his assistant. Rubbing her eyes with the back of her hand, "I'm sorry I made a mess." A predicament, she pulls on my hearts sentiment, Millicent, my little girl so sweet and innocent. 5/26/2017
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Raven Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 4:24 PM
Hi Eve, this is such a wonderful write. From the first line to the last i was entranced by your wonderful words. A wonderful picture you have found, both complement each other. Your wonderful, heartfelt words just sing into the mind. An excellent write Eve. Has to be a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
Thirtyseven Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 9:16 AM
Love that picture, and your words bring it to life. Nicely done.
Andresen Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 2:20 AM
- Deep touching and lovely written, Eve - Best wishes for a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 4:44 PM
wow, this is really really nice!!! WAs it in the art contest because it sure fit that idea and I think it would be a winner if it were in such a contest. I love the description of Millicent. the first line is how I would describe my hair when I am out in the sunshine!!
Roper Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 5:05 PM
I didn't enter the art contest, Andrea, I have no idea why I didn't. Awe,,, this could have been about you with the cinnamon hair.. Thank you for reading my poem...
Sathasivam Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 2:05 AM
Excellent and a heartfelt portrait of a sweet girl. Very touching write. Thanks for sharing it
Onclaud Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 3:47 PM
ohh, i am taken by this beautiful poem so fascinatingly scribed, eve..a .delight to read, as usual..huggs
Ricci Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 7:58 AM
Good Morning Eve. Please take a bow for such beautiful poetry composed. You deliver heartfelt thoughts. Poetry is all about expression heart soul and emotion. This one entry has it all. Be proud of your creation and work. Well done entirely and completely. Bless Millicent and her ever beautiful assistant. Have a wonderful day.
Aniagyei Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 1:51 PM
This is beauty, described so well
Cozart Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 10:48 AM
she pulls on my heart, too. good job.
Gupta Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 9:01 AM
Lovely ...
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