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Millicent, hair of sunlight and cinnamon, soft skin, powder scent, freckles, rosy cheeks, and fleeting amusement. Behind curtains and furniture, chased by the hound in waves of laughter she runs round and round, hound coming after. A faithful hound, her constant companion, lingers in a questionable expression, he raise his ears and cocked his head as he hears his name as a participant. Millicent wrinkles her nose; her little lips began to quiver, tears pool in her eyes soon shimmer evanescent, a face of pure innocence. In the corner Millicent sits, a faithful hound beside his assistant. Rubbing her eyes with the back of her hand, "I'm sorry I made a mess." A predicament, she pulls on my hearts sentiment, Millicent, my little girl so sweet and innocent. 5/26/2017

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Date: 6/1/2017 4:24:00 PM
Hi Eve, this is such a wonderful write. From the first line to the last i was entranced by your wonderful words. A wonderful picture you have found, both complement each other. Your wonderful, heartfelt words just sing into the mind. An excellent write Eve. Has to be a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/31/2017 9:16:00 AM
Love that picture, and your words bring it to life. Nicely done.
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Date: 5/31/2017 2:20:00 AM
- Deep touching and lovely written, Eve - Best wishes for a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/29/2017 4:44:00 PM
wow, this is really really nice!!! WAs it in the art contest because it sure fit that idea and I think it would be a winner if it were in such a contest. I love the description of Millicent. the first line is how I would describe my hair when I am out in the sunshine!!
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Date: 5/29/2017 5:05:00 PM
I didn't enter the art contest, Andrea, I have no idea why I didn't. Awe,,, this could have been about you with the cinnamon hair.. Thank you for reading my poem...
Date: 5/29/2017 2:05:00 AM
Excellent and a heartfelt portrait of a sweet girl. Very touching write. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 5/28/2017 3:47:00 PM
ohh, i am taken by this beautiful poem so fascinatingly scribed, eve..a .delight to read, as usual..huggs
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Date: 5/28/2017 7:58:00 AM
Good Morning Eve. Please take a bow for such beautiful poetry composed. You deliver heartfelt thoughts. Poetry is all about expression heart soul and emotion. This one entry has it all. Be proud of your creation and work. Well done entirely and completely. Bless Millicent and her ever beautiful assistant. Have a wonderful day.
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Date: 5/27/2017 1:51:00 PM
This is beauty, described so well
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Date: 5/27/2017 10:48:00 AM
she pulls on my heart, too. good job.
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Date: 5/27/2017 9:01:00 AM
Lovely ...
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