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Migration

~~As the birds take flight to warmer destinations autumn awakens~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/4/2013 3:02:00 PM
rereading this autumnal delight. Trying to think where to see poems of yours never viewed and not sure I have any of yours left to comment to! Let me try this limerick I just noticed.
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Date: 9/20/2010 9:35:00 PM
congrats in your honorable mention in this contest nice read peace, Kurt
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:52:00 PM
Hello, Wilma stopping by to say hi! ALready placed a comment here. Enjoy yourself,, by the way it has been raining here in c.c. texas non stop. Later,..p.d.
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:51:00 PM
grats on contest with this great haiku
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Date: 9/6/2010 2:53:00 PM
They will be coming HERE, Wilma! :) congratulatioins to you
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Date: 9/3/2010 3:36:00 AM
What an imaginative haiku. Many congrats for the win.
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Date: 9/2/2010 10:04:00 PM
Great haiku. Congratulations Wilma
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Date: 9/1/2010 1:32:00 PM
Great write and win!!! luv Michael
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your win in Amelia Harmon's contest "Fall". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM Wilma! Love the imagery..infact, I love everything about Fall. LOL Love, Audrey
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:12:00 PM
nice one , congrats on your HM
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Date: 8/31/2010 5:59:00 PM
Sweet Wilma, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. So happy to see this lovely haiku in the winners' circle! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:55:00 PM
Way to go Wilma..short but oh so sweet. congrats. BG
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Date: 8/31/2010 2:39:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on your HM in the Fall contest... enjoy your special honor this happy moment my friend... lovely piece...dear friend...
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Date: 8/28/2010 12:15:00 PM
It is time that Autumn yawns and arises..I am ready for him to get up..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 8/27/2010 2:21:00 PM
Very nice, Wilma. There are two contests going on I think this could work for either one of them! LUv,Andrea
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Date: 8/27/2010 1:58:00 PM
I used to love watching the migration of geese in the sky when I grew up in NJ. All these birds will soon be headed to Florida to enjoy mild winters. Your poem created such a pleasurable image, Wilma. Thank you for gracing us with this terrific haiku. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/27/2010 12:11:00 PM
That last line has warmth despite the obvious justaposition of seasons. Nice alliteration to finish. Best to you and thank you always for your comments. Regards, Gerard
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Date: 8/27/2010 10:56:00 AM
This Haiku soars with the birds Wilma, nice one >> James
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Date: 8/27/2010 10:28:00 AM
wow!!!! yes winter is around the corner,..p.d.
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Date: 8/27/2010 9:36:00 AM
AMAZING DESTINATIoN*luv~SKAT
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Date: 8/27/2010 8:35:00 AM
Great fall picture you paint...luv Michael
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Date: 8/27/2010 8:26:00 AM
What a wonderful entry this would be for the Fall contest. Hope you have entered? Lovely poem! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/27/2010 5:18:00 AM
enjoyed reading today...I am ready for the autumn...it is still 90+ degrees here.
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