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Midnight Write

Muse where are you come rescue me From the abyss of my boring poetry I wish to float and flow endlessly To bring a new perspective to bravely lead I try to grow but I’m stuck in rhyme zone My skills are limited and my words not long I prefer simple as I am simple like a song Who’s melody you’d know and never get wrong So if I take a step will you help In my brain is a button blue Push it and activate the truth Imagine yourself floating everywhere Not a care for forms or rules just be True to your own dreams and desires Be selfish in the moment of inspiration Nothing is wrong it’s all a song Sing it whisper or just flow Muse I’m confused when do I begin To write my life’s happy ending Without pretending to need format Free to be me yet needing that connection Of humanity and sanity perhaps vanity Will paint me as flawed paused by God Perhaps I grow too slow and my limits I know are like prose but with color I do know you have to be bold Encourage yourself in the Lord But I have questions a lot of questions Wtf about many things Why do babies get cancer Do You allow miscarriages or is that satin Why are so many perverts praying on the innocent Why is USA so rich yet so poor Who are Your people No really give me a sign So I know who to avoid Don’t give up on us though dear Lord My muse must be an angel For she leaves me like a fish Out of water yet forces me To learn to breathe and become a new thing This one should be in the poem cemetery But I will post for my growth and hope

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Date: 2/7/2025 1:07:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Midnight Write." I find the muse has a mind of it's own. Also needing a vacation from time to time to rest. You write beautifully. Life has many questions some with no answers. Have a blessed day/weekend..................
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/7/2025 4:04:00 PM
You as well have a blessed writing day! Glad you enjoyed Paula!
Date: 2/3/2025 10:51:00 PM
Nothing simple about this. You have a lot of talent. You are just saying what a lot of us feel as we ponder creating something. Very much enjoyed!
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/4/2025 12:43:00 AM
Thank you Christopher! Sometimes my thoughts seem to not flow well within the poem.
Date: 2/3/2025 9:53:00 PM
The vicissitudes of evolution from primitive protozoa to neutrino-bison-quark parallel proton-smashing irreality environs are indubitably assignable to incorrigible evanescence. ~ Limb Ted Lex-Conn
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/4/2025 12:42:00 AM
Woah Gershon! You got me scratching my head! Lol
Date: 2/3/2025 8:26:00 PM
It's a good poem with a lot of emotion. No cemetery, please. I can relate.
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/4/2025 12:41:00 AM
Really? Wow! Thanks for your comment!
Date: 2/3/2025 5:20:00 PM
Karen, it seems you are doubtful about your abilities as a poet. Be assured, you are endowed with poetic gifts. Write on ,dear one. You may write as your mind prompts you without caring for form or rhyme. "Not a care for forms or rules just be True to your own dreams and desires". So very true.... ! I like it. It is how I too think. Your questions to God are everyone's questions . I too often ask myself....Why there's so much suffering and cruelty. Great composition, dear friend.
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/3/2025 6:36:00 PM
Yes you are correct I feel I need to grow. Thank you for your comment. I will definitely try to accept that I may not be able to do all the forms but I have potential. :0) Thanks for liking this one!
Date: 2/3/2025 5:37:00 AM
Hi Karen, with so much suffering in this world it makes me wonder if the devil is in control, hope your keeping well. xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/3/2025 6:41:00 AM
I KNOW God is in control but is He allowing things for whatever reason???? I’m so confused. Perhaps we are being drawn closer to God through trial and tribulation??? I’m well hope you are!

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