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Vibrant twilight colours drain from transcending skies. Black velvet blankets remain; luminous stars rise. Tread lightly, darkness is here. Such an eerie night, promise me to remain near; be my guiding light. Shadows begin to appear, under the bright moon. Be silent, they may hear can we go home soon? In your arms, one becomes safe, feeling warm in your embrace. Simple glimpse of your face takes me to that magic place. Tranced, you gaze into my eyes. Hunter with his prey in sight; preparing to claim his prize. One is powerless to fight. Lost are all inhibitions as hands are placed on my hips. Forgotten tribulations as you kiss my virgin lips. Daylight brings a halt to this romantic rendezvous. Abrupt end to luscious bliss as reality breaks through. Silent One Originally written 18 March 2016 Re-posted 16 January 2018

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Date: 2/8/2018 11:56:00 PM
Imagery on point, Silent One, Great job.
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Date: 2/7/2018 6:06:00 AM
love the way the rhymes inter twined.
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Date: 1/30/2018 10:36:00 PM
Wonderful images! Thank you for a dreamy write! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 1/30/2018 11:10:00 AM
I adore this romantic piece Silent! It is going into my Faves! : )
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Date: 1/28/2018 2:36:00 PM
Your rhymes are excellent, Silent, love much, thanks
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Date: 1/27/2018 2:53:00 PM
Very, very romantic Silent One:)
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Date: 1/18/2018 8:15:00 PM
Thanks for the fantasy! Well Done!!!
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Silent One
Date: 1/24/2018 9:14:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 1/18/2018 11:47:00 AM
I'm never going to read any of your poems. But I will copy and paste them to my trusty Ginger app  And I will click and it will read it back to me in a guy's voice   Visit me sometimes, it's different https://plus.google.com/u/0/+marcacrich
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Silent One
Date: 1/24/2018 9:14:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 1/18/2018 9:06:00 AM
Its amazing how a picture can inspire and paint such a romantic poem in the eyes of a poet. BEAUTIFUL!
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Date: 1/18/2018 11:48:00 AM
marc Acrich Date: 1/18/2018 11:47:00 AM Edit Block poet from commenting on your poetry I'm never going to read any of your poems. But I will copy and paste them to my trusty Ginger app And I will click and it will read it back to me in a guy's voice Visit me sometimes, it's different https://plus.google.com/u/0/+marcacrich Reply
Date: 1/17/2018 11:42:00 PM
So romantic and so enjoyable write, Silent...
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Date: 1/17/2018 8:52:00 PM
You painted a very romantic picture, Silent One. I enjoyed the formatting of this type of poetry as well, with the short patterned verses. Cool pic with it.
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Date: 1/17/2018 7:44:00 PM
Dreamy and soooo romantic Silent One; enjoyed this seductive poem!~Che :)
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Date: 1/16/2018 11:54:00 PM
Dreamy...
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Date: 1/16/2018 9:42:00 PM
Sine amore, nihil est vita. LUX VITAE.
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Date: 1/16/2018 6:32:00 PM
Hi Silent, This is such a beautiful and well written write. I'm so glad you reposted it again:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/16/2018 4:39:00 PM
An amazing write SO! Your imagery will make anyone walk under the bright moon just for more words.
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Date: 1/16/2018 4:33:00 PM
is this a dream i wonder, matters not, a beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/16/2018 4:02:00 PM
Very romantic and blissful. Loved the imagery. Good write.
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Silent One
Date: 1/16/2018 4:06:00 PM
Thank you Eileen..
Date: 1/16/2018 3:11:00 PM
- Yes, really magical and romantic S.O.... "as you kiss my virgin lips" ...WOOOW ...a bit of a kiss :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Silent One
Date: 1/16/2018 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise..
Date: 1/16/2018 2:52:00 PM
Beautifully romantic Silent One. I enjoyed this :)
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Silent One
Date: 1/16/2018 3:14:00 PM
Thank you Heidi..
Date: 1/16/2018 2:51:00 PM
Darn that reality! Always interrupting at the most unfortunate moments! Very romantic poem, Silent. Had me in a trance, as I thought of what it might be like to gaze into your eyes. lol :D
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Silent One
Date: 1/16/2018 3:13:00 PM
I know you were joking, thanks for the feedback...
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Becca Teagan
Date: 1/16/2018 3:12:00 PM
ok, just to clarify ... I was just joking, referring to the fact that you never show your face :D
Date: 1/16/2018 12:27:00 PM
A beautiful dream, Silent One. Of course, I was drawn to the virgin lips line !!!
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Silent One
Date: 1/16/2018 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Mike, they were some lips...
Date: 1/16/2018 10:21:00 AM
You never, never disappoint!
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Silent One
Date: 1/16/2018 3:37:00 PM
Thank you Sunlite..
Date: 1/16/2018 10:20:00 AM
You have such a way with words, swoon worthy ;)
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Silent One
Date: 1/16/2018 3:37:00 PM
Thanks Mo..
Date: 1/16/2018 10:12:00 AM
Your vibrant imagination never drains of color! I enjoyed your poem. Jeffrey
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Silent One
Date: 1/16/2018 4:05:00 PM
Thank you Jeffrey..
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