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Midnight Walk

Vibrant twilight colours drain from transcending skies. Black velvet blankets remain; luminous stars rise. Tread lightly, darkness is here. Such an eerie night, promise me to remain near; be my guiding light. Shadows begin to appear, under the bright moon. Be silent, they may hear can we go home soon? In your arms, one becomes safe, feeling warm in your embrace. Simple glimpse of your face takes me to that magic place. Tranced, you gaze into my eyes. Hunter with his prey in sight; preparing to claim his prize. One is powerless to fight. Lost are all inhibitions as hands are placed on my hips. Forgotten tribulations as you kiss my virgin lips. Daylight brings a halt to this romantic rendezvous. Abrupt end to luscious bliss as reality breaks through. Silent One Originally written 18 March 2016 Re-posted 16 January 2018
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Payton Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 11:56 PM
Imagery on point, Silent One, Great job.
Olaniran Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:06 AM
love the way the rhymes inter twined.
Wolf Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Wonderful images! Thank you for a dreamy write! Best wishes, Gershon
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 11:10 AM
I adore this romantic piece Silent! It is going into my Faves! : )
Reza Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Your rhymes are excellent, Silent, love much, thanks
Parveen Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Very, very romantic Silent One:)
Cronin Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 8:15 PM
Thanks for the fantasy! Well Done!!!
One Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Thank you...
Acrich Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 11:47 AM
I'm never going to read any of your poems. But I will copy and paste them to my trusty Ginger app  And I will click and it will read it back to me in a guy's voice   Visit me sometimes, it's different https://plus.google.com/u/0/+marcacrich
One Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Thank you...
George   Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 9:06 AM
Its amazing how a picture can inspire and paint such a romantic poem in the eyes of a poet. BEAUTIFUL!
Acrich Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 11:48 AM
marc Acrich Date: 1/18/2018 11:47:00 AM Edit Block poet from commenting on your poetry I'm never going to read any of your poems. But I will copy and paste them to my trusty Ginger app And I will click and it will read it back to me in a guy's voice Visit me sometimes, it's different https://plus.google.com/u/0/+marcacrich Reply
Parmale Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 11:42 PM
So romantic and so enjoyable write, Silent...
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 8:52 PM
You painted a very romantic picture, Silent One. I enjoyed the formatting of this type of poetry as well, with the short patterned verses. Cool pic with it.
Hoffman Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Dreamy and soooo romantic Silent One; enjoyed this seductive poem!~Che :)
Terry Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 11:54 PM
Dreamy...
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 9:42 PM
Sine amore, nihil est vita. LUX VITAE.
Y. Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 6:32 PM
Hi Silent, This is such a beautiful and well written write. I'm so glad you reposted it again:-) Alexis
Swartz Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 4:39 PM
An amazing write SO! Your imagery will make anyone walk under the bright moon just for more words.
Horsman Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 4:33 PM
is this a dream i wonder, matters not, a beautiful poem.
Manassian Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Very romantic and blissful. Loved the imagery. Good write.
One Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Thank you Eileen..
Andresen Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 3:11 PM
- Yes, really magical and romantic S.O.... "as you kiss my virgin lips" ...WOOOW ...a bit of a kiss :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 3:24 PM
Thank you Anne Lise..
Sands Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Beautifully romantic Silent One. I enjoyed this :)
One Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Thank you Heidi..
Teagan Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Darn that reality! Always interrupting at the most unfortunate moments! Very romantic poem, Silent. Had me in a trance, as I thought of what it might be like to gaze into your eyes. lol :D
One Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 3:13 PM
I know you were joking, thanks for the feedback...
Teagan Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 3:12 PM
ok, just to clarify ... I was just joking, referring to the fact that you never show your face :D
Gentile Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 12:27 PM
A beautiful dream, Silent One. Of course, I was drawn to the virgin lips line !!!
One Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 3:24 PM
Thanks Mike, they were some lips...
Wanter Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 10:21 AM
You never, never disappoint!
One Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Thank you Sunlite..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 10:20 AM
You have such a way with words, swoon worthy ;)
One Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Thanks Mo..
Spencer Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 10:12 AM
Your vibrant imagination never drains of color! I enjoyed your poem. Jeffrey
One Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Thank you Jeffrey..
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