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Midnight Valentine

The sun's gone down It's you and I We're home alone And all's quiet Two candles lit Sweet music sways Nothing matters As we hold hands Just you and I Togetherness Over champagne Chocolate kiss Strawberries dipped One fondue fork For you and I And all's quiet As midnight strikes Love in the air AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on January 28, 2019 for contest MIDNIGHT VALENTINE sponsored by CHANTELLE ANNE COOKE - RANKED 13TH

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Date: 1/30/2019 12:19:00 PM
You put love in the air and on the ground and all around with this poem dear Line. gl in the contest . Good day to you xo
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Date: 1/30/2019 2:20:00 PM
Thanks, Pixie, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 1/29/2019 2:32:00 PM
Great poem. You could put music to it. It flows so well.
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Date: 1/29/2019 5:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, WA. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/29/2019 8:01:00 AM
Line, very sweet and romantic ~
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/29/2019 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance.
Date: 1/28/2019 9:52:00 PM
A sweet Valentine!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/29/2019 9:07:00 AM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/28/2019 8:02:00 PM
WOW! Line, do you have a sister lol this was wonderful my friend!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/28/2019 9:31:00 PM
I can set you up, Bobby. LOL.
Date: 1/28/2019 7:29:00 PM
Line, so interesting that you wrote "nothing matters," a blatant contrast to the fact that every single line mattered. Succinct, romantic, and beautifully done.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/28/2019 7:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/28/2019 7:22:00 PM
Very Nice! I wonder what song is playing.....
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/28/2019 7:26:00 PM
LOL. Thanks for dropping by, Timothy.

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