Midnight Romance

I touched the sable locks of hair that fell
around your face so softly. Ivory
you called my skin you came to know so well -
though first, like porcelain you handled me!
Where we reclined, cerulean above
us was the sky. Your kisses were divine
there on the seashore where i felt such love!
Your eyes, obsidian, reflected mine;
I drank you in like absinthe - oh, those eyes!
Our passion, like when fire is charcoal fed,
turned crimson like the sunlight when it dies
into the night! For us - sun brightly bled.
We stayed past midnight. Was it all just smoke?
The ash of roses wrapped us when we woke.


Nov. 1, 2017 for Dale Gregory Cozart's Midnight Romance Poetry Contest
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Duet Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 1:27 PM
Very romantic. Loved it and congrats on your placement in the contest.
May Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 1:06 PM
Wonderful write Andrea..Congrats on your win..
Gauthier Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Back with more congrats, Andrea.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 9:59 AM
Stunning romantic imagery in this winning poem Andrea. Just beautiful! Congratulations on your win! : )
Grasso Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Just lovely, as always, Andrea! Congratulations! ...Fran
Canerdy Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 9:34 PM
So LOVELY, Andrea! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Haight Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Back to congratulate you on another fine win for this wonderful Sonnet, Andrea! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 1:28 PM
beautiful sonnet sweet Andrea, congrats! :) -luloo
Barden Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 12:19 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Andrea - blessings and best wishes for a Happy New Year, friend! :-)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 12:14 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on you fine win.
Ashley Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Returning with congratulations Andrea for your awesome win with your gorgeous poem.. ~Susan
Williams Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 1:07 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win! I hope all is going well for you and yours in our New Year. You have my ongoing best wishes. :) Bartholomew
Hamilton Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Nice sonnet Andrea, I don't remember reading this one, congrats on another fine win!
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 5:05 PM
Lovely. Congrats on your win.
Barden Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 10:49 PM
Ooh, I love the sensual but slightly dark edge of this one ... tinged with a hot blade of passion - superb! Congrats on your win, Dear Friend! :-) <3
May Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 5:29 AM
Lovely write Andrea...Congrats on your win..
George   Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 12:55 PM
Awesome Awesome! What a picture you paint with this sonnet, Andrea. Sincerely, Elaine Andrea
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 7:47 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Hamilton Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 6:27 PM
Lovely winning sonnet Andrea congrats!
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 4:07 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:52 PM
Beautiful imagery in a well-written Sonnet that flows so magically, Andrea. Congratulations on your placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
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November 6, 2017 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations Andrea on a well deserved win! Very lovely sonnet. Best, Judy
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November 6, 2017 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on your 10th Place win! Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
D. Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 11:17 AM
This is awesome. I love how you wove all the words together. Good luck in contest
Mhangwa Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 3:37 PM
Brilliant as always! Such a romantic poem! All the best in the contest
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