Notes About The Poem

~1st Place~
Contest: Your Best Sonnet October 1 - December 31, 2017
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Judged: 01/10/2018

~3rd Place~
Premiere Contest: Midnight Romance
Sponsor:  Dale Gregory Cozart
Judged: 11/08/2017

Required words in order of appearance:
cerulean  crimson  absinthe  obsidian  charcoal  
porcelain  ivory  sable  ash of roses  smoke
  

 

Midnight Romance


The sunset left bright colors; by and by
cerulean and crimson layers wove 
designs that blazed beneath the moonlit sky
and spread an absinthe glow upon their cove.

And like obsidian, the charcoal lake
reflected all the beauty of this night, 
and in such splendor, lovers would partake
and stir their fire beneath night's sky delight.

Her porcelain-like ivory face glowed
against her sable-brown, long, silky hair.
The ash of roses on her cheeks soon showed
the smoke and heat of passion in the air.

And midnight romance led two hearts to twine...
enjoy their rhapsody of love divine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pina Avatar
April 18, 2026 at 11:30 PM
Congrats on the win in my contest, I could visualize myself in your words. Hope all is well, - Seth
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 4:01 PM
Congrats, Sandra, on your well deserved gold medal finish with this beauty.
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 6:41 PM
Thank you very much, Line! So nice of you to find and read some of my older poems! I am grateful for your supportive comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Lovely Sandra, congratulations, very well deserved...
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 6:48 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie. Much appreciated. Sandra
George   Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Beautiful, Sandra. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Sincerely, Elaine
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Elaine, for your visit, uplifting comments, and congrats! :) Hugs, Sandra
Pinet Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Gentle, soft thoughts of love that bring their magic to the page and lure us with their beauty. Congratulations on your well deserved win my friend, Emile.
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Hi, Emile. Thank you so much for stopping by with your lovely comments and congratulations! :) Sandra
Gondolf Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Sandra, congrats once again. I love this sonnet just as much the second time around. John
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 6:50 PM
And, thank you once again, John! Much appreciated! :) Sandra
Scars Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 6:17 AM
Just beautiful sweet Sandra, congrats :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 6:51 PM
Thank you very much, Laura Loo! :) Hugs, Sandra
Stebbings Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:21 AM
Congratulations, Sandra, on your top place. A beautifully painted scene. // Barry
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Hi, Barry. Thank you so much for your lovely comments and congrats! :) Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 10:19 PM
Congratulations,Sandra on your great win.
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Thank you once again, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Ashley Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 7:54 PM
I remember this captivating sonnet, Sandra. An exquisite beauty! Congratulations for your well deserved first place win, my friend. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 6:53 PM
Once again, Susan, I so much appreciate your positive and uplifting comments and congrats. Thanks so much. Hugs, Sandra
Parker Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:34 PM
I remember this sonnet, it is still good...congratulations dear poet
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Thank you so much, Frederic, for your visit and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra
S     Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Congratulations on your first place win Sandra!! Amazing sonnet!!! ~Judy
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Thanks, Judith, for your encouraging comment and congratulations! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful sonnet garnering 1st place, Sandra. Pure enchantment! I loved it. : )
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Thanks, Connie, for your lovely words of encouragement and congratulations! :) Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 2:39 PM
This is wonderful Sandra, a 37/40 by my criteria very close to a perfect sonnet in my opinion, congrats on a stand alone first place!
Haight Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 6:59 PM
John, thank you ever so much for my awesome placement, and for your supportive comments. I enjoy participating in your contests very much. Sandra
Barden Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 10:36 PM
Absolutely breathtaking and gorgeous write, Sandra, and such a well-deserved win, my friend - blessings - you are such a consistently GREAT read! Always a pleasure ... :-) <3
May Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 5:47 AM
Congrats on a fine win Sandra
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Thank you so much, Joseph! Sandra
George   Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 12:43 PM
Beautiful! Sandra. congratulations on your top-notch win. Elaine
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Thank you very much, Elaine! I appreciate your visit and supportive comments. Sandra
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 7:36 PM
Sandra, wonderful poem, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Thank you again, Eve, for your visits and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 6:32 PM
This is beautiful Sandra, another worthy winner!
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Thank you, John! Sandra
Krampe Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 5:01 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra!
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:07 AM
Thank you so much, Agnes. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:52 PM
what a beautiful romantic sonnet Sandra, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:07 AM
Thank you very much, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
S     Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:06 AM
Congratulations Sandra on your win! Enjoyed your sonnet very much! Best, Judy
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:39 PM
Thank you, Judith, for your visit and very supportive comments. Much appreciated. Sandra
Gondolf Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Sandra, just stopping back by to congratulate you on your win for this beautiful sonnet.
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:39 PM
Thank you once again, John, for your wonderful support! Sandra
Cozart Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations on your 4th Place win! Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:38 PM
Thank you, Gregory! I enjoyed your contest and appreciate my nice placement! Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 3:58 PM
Absolutely lovely, Sandra! Janice
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:37 PM
Thank you very much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
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