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Midnight Romance

Twilight's color is ashes of roses
the horizon glows crimson as sun sets
the round cerulean sky now decomposes
to invite a charcoal night that love begets
ivory stars weave a soft nocturnal shawl
lover's swish absinthe by dim candlelight
we toast to shadows floating on the wall
from lambent flames that burn in passionate night
candles melt in their porcelain holder
night falls darker like obsidian glass
moonlight's smoke warms lips that start to smolder
silhouettes, drift until the dawn trespass
wrapped in soft sable tranquil and content
as divine passion was inhaled and spent
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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La France Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 5:32 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my HM's and NA's October 2020 Challenge, great pic _Constance
Ashley Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Dear Frederic, the lush romance of your potent pen never fails to enrapture my swooning heart and imagination with the intense beauty of your imagery. Sublime and divine passion indeed! Every line a precious gem of poetic expression. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Constance's contest, dear poet, dear friend.. ~Susan
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 3:00 PM
Intense passion alludes artistically, for it escapes no lines, Frederic, an overall breathless undertaking that you have fortuned my way, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Neumann Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 9:03 AM
This is divine Frederic ...
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 5:05 AM
This is a number one for me Federic! Congratulations on your win with this a romantic classic! : )
Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 6:08 PM
Back with more congrats, Frederic.
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 4:42 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentry Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 9:20 PM
What a beautiful sonnet! Congratulations on your win with this well-written poem with romantic imagery and color.
Gauthier Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 4:44 PM
I love the imagery in your poem, Frederic. Thanks for entering my contest and earning a well deserved silver medal.
Lane Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 10:47 AM
Oh my goodness, Frederic. I was correct in assuming your entry would be a winning one. Every line drips with emotion and passion...Third stanza is beyond glorious.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 2:13 PM
This is a beautiful sonnet. Great job on a tough assignment. Good luck in the contest.
Vaso Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 10:48 PM
This is poetry, beautiful sonnet!
Gauthier Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 9:47 PM
Beautifully coloured poetry. Very well crafted and lovely.
One Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 11:30 AM
Frederic my friend, you are the king of romantic sonnets..
Gondolf Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Great imagery, Frederic. Good luck in the contest.
Manassian Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 2:11 AM
:) sweet and delicious. I loved this piece. The words you use to refer to colors are superb. Good luck in the contest.
Onclaud Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 9:15 PM
subtle passion at its best, frederick... your sonnet is on fire...huggs
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 6:50 PM
If anyone can nail it with a romantic sonnet its you Frederic! Your imagery is so sensual and you've woven the colours in superbly! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Medders Tobechi Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 3:27 PM
Nice job of a tough assignment. Good luck in the contest.
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