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Twilight's color is ashes of roses Horizon is crimson as the sun sets Round cerulean sky decomposes To invite a charcoal night love begets Ivory stars form a covering shawl Lovers swish absinthe in dim candlelight Toast to shadows that float upon the wall From lambent flames in a passionate night Candles melt to their porcelain holder Night turns darker like obsidian glass Moonlight's smoke embraces lips that soon smolder Silhouettes, until dawn can trespass Wrapped in soft sable fulfilled and content A divine passion was inhaled and spent

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/8/2020 5:32:00 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my HM's and NA's October 2020 Challenge, great pic _Constance
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Date: 11/6/2020 9:02:00 AM
Dear Frederic, the lush romance of your potent pen never fails to enrapture my swooning heart and imagination with the intense beauty of your imagery. Sublime and divine passion indeed! Every line a precious gem of poetic expression. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Constance's contest, dear poet, dear friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/3/2020 3:00:00 PM
Intense passion alludes artistically, for it escapes no lines, Frederic, an overall breathless undertaking that you have fortuned my way, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Date: 6/16/2019 9:03:00 AM
This is divine Frederic ...
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Date: 6/16/2019 5:05:00 AM
This is a number one for me Federic! Congratulations on your win with this a romantic classic! : )
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Date: 6/15/2019 6:08:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Frederic.
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Date: 4/20/2018 4:42:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/19/2018 9:20:00 PM
What a beautiful sonnet! Congratulations on your win with this well-written poem with romantic imagery and color.
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Date: 4/19/2018 4:44:00 PM
I love the imagery in your poem, Frederic. Thanks for entering my contest and earning a well deserved silver medal.
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Date: 11/2/2017 10:47:00 AM
Oh my goodness, Frederic. I was correct in assuming your entry would be a winning one. Every line drips with emotion and passion...Third stanza is beyond glorious.
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Date: 10/18/2017 2:13:00 PM
This is a beautiful sonnet. Great job on a tough assignment. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/9/2017 10:48:00 PM
This is poetry, beautiful sonnet!
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Date: 10/9/2017 9:47:00 PM
Beautifully coloured poetry. Very well crafted and lovely.
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Date: 10/9/2017 11:30:00 AM
Frederic my friend, you are the king of romantic sonnets..
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Date: 10/8/2017 6:55:00 AM
Great imagery, Frederic. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/8/2017 2:11:00 AM
:) sweet and delicious. I loved this piece. The words you use to refer to colors are superb. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/7/2017 9:15:00 PM
subtle passion at its best, frederick... your sonnet is on fire...huggs
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Date: 10/7/2017 6:50:00 PM
If anyone can nail it with a romantic sonnet its you Frederic! Your imagery is so sensual and you've woven the colours in superbly! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2017 3:27:00 PM
Nice job of a tough assignment. Good luck in the contest.
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