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Midair Evaporated

A wet destiny was eye of the storm in the middle of A whirlwind end to our love was the reason because Lost and tossed at sea by sad, unanchored memories Tears falling like torrential rain, heart shipwrecked in a sea of pain I would’ve cried more over the loss of you But the tears fell short, when I met another rejected soul too I would’ve cried so much more over the loss of your love But the tears fell short, when my heart was born again in the revival joy thereof I mourned the death of our love But the tears fell not to the ground ... midair evaporated I grieved at the burial of our love But the pain stopped pouring down ... midair evaporated I cried so often and so much, the tears kept falling and falling down from sad, damp eyes above Until that calm day, when I heard no more splashing sound For into my life walked a new sunshine love My cloudy mind is now cleared up Midair evaporated tears is the loving reason because

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Date: 11/27/2017 5:28:00 PM
Freddie, the restorative powers of new love are amazing.. a lovely soul stirring write of lost love and new love found. Beautifully expressed and enjoyed!
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Date: 11/27/2017 4:02:00 PM
Beautifully emotional write of sadness and new beginnings Freddie! Enjoyed reading it. Best, Judy
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Date: 11/27/2017 3:19:00 PM
Reminds me a bit of that old Roy Orbison song, Crying over you, well done Freddie...
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Date: 11/27/2017 1:50:00 PM
Yes, Freddie...New love heals all...sometimes...All the best my friend
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Date: 11/27/2017 11:37:00 AM
Wonderfully penned dear poet! Much love xomo :)
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Date: 11/27/2017 9:29:00 AM
A loving discourse of love lost and new love found--well written poem depicting changing emotions!
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