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Mid-March

I can sense it now Less away than a quarter-turn on the wheel Just two warm bright days And the sense is of coming spring There will be winter yet But things are at their ugliest Dirty snow Its withered banks hover above Puddled conglomerate Outdoors cannot get uglier Though the Gods throw rot on the wind Just two warm bright days And the squirrels cease burying nuts Stray cats less hungry turn up later for scraps Birds are more particular in their fare There is subtle breath withheld but out there somewhere

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/24/2009 1:35:00 PM
I guess I'll take the dirty snow if it keeps on melting. I'm ready for spring. Nice use of imagery in this poem. Interesting perspective. I really like the second line. Keep on writing. Thank you for your ongoing encouragement. Karen
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Date: 2/20/2009 10:16:00 AM
Hi Daver, "Gods throw rot on the wind" is a powerful image. Indeed, I think we shall all be thankful when winter finally disappears. A transplanted Yankee, I am all too familiar with the transition of snow's white blanket to a grey stain on the landscape. Thanks for reading "Hungry and Homeless Americans." But giving where you live and the conditions you described, I doubt there were any new revelations. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/17/2009 3:35:00 PM
This makes me think of my solarium where i sit and watch the the squirrels in the front yard, Love Aleera
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Date: 2/17/2009 11:40:00 AM
Interesting format..some great lines in this..BG
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Date: 2/17/2009 10:18:00 AM
I LOVE these last two lines: Birds are more particular in their fare There is subtle breath withheld but out there somewhere and the way the entire poem is formatted. Very nicely done Daver :o) BTW - My Crows Caw poem is actually a spoken piece - with music - and real crow sounds!
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