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mortality speaks words in lieu of razor blades healing some but mostly containing the mess ***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/18/2018 1:01:00 AM
Words can heal and kill. My mind immediately went to the morgue during a postmortem. Very deep
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Date: 12/10/2018 9:43:00 PM
Cutting to the quick …. Pen more powerful than sword … my clichés do this one no justice. Superb! ~ Gershon
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/11/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Wolf Man <3
Date: 12/6/2018 9:00:00 PM
... indeed. Powerful, Dear Mo, and to the marrow. Words can chill ... superb write. <3
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/8/2018 7:55:00 AM
Thank you Greg <3 xomo!
Date: 11/30/2018 6:28:00 PM
Very deep, my friend... and well said!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/1/2018 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Rhona :) xomo!
Date: 11/30/2018 10:01:00 AM
Some messes are not as easy to contain as others. : )
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/1/2018 9:07:00 AM
So true ;) xomo!
Date: 11/30/2018 9:20:00 AM
You pack so much into these short pieces...I'm envious!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/30/2018 9:38:00 AM
Tee hee, thank you! Flip side I'd love to do an intricate shape poem but can't muster enough words. ;) xomo!
Date: 11/30/2018 7:33:00 AM
Wow! So true, Maureen! I just love when no thought came before I said something! How does that happen!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/30/2018 8:04:00 AM
Lol! Ooh I'v got a name for it, an "art fart" ;) Thank you Kim! xomo
Date: 11/30/2018 2:30:00 AM
Powerful, I can relate for sure.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/30/2018 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Arthur <3 xomo

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