Message For Peace

Boom ....boom....boom Guns roar, bombs blast, causing death, deformity and destruction, leading to distress and doom. Streets reek with the smell of newly shed blood. Dead bodies pile, all around is carnage. Dark clouds hang on the horizon In one name or other, violence is concocted. Frivolous ideologies kill lives of innocents with the world turning into a battlefield, We are besieged by terror's sting. We need an escape from this inferno. Pure harmony is what the world longs for. Let no cannons roar, let no rebellion shriek Let no wounded soldier fall down and die Let no woman become a widow, no child- an orphan Let no drop of blood spill on the cobalt streets Paint the canvas in colors of love and kindness. Strive to build a land of peace- Peace is an energy field much more potent than a battlefield Is peace merely the absence of war? No, it is a tranquil feeling in the breast, the absence of fear, an all encompassing aura of safety the annihilation of prejudices and a tight knot of oneness It is being in peace with oneself and others! Hope this calming dream and lovely fancy of mine shall no more remain a wild fantasy
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 19, 2022 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
Alex Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 10:21 PM
Gloomy grim truths illustrated. Optimistic thoughts are given. Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 5:05 AM
Back with BIG congrats, Valsa, on your first place in the contest.
Gangabissoon Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 4:06 AM
Congrats on your win and thanks for participating :)
George Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 4:47 AM
Thank you so much Anoucheka for the chance you gave . So glad my poem got placed one of the Firsts in your contest.....
Deo Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 9:45 PM
Sister Valsa. U do the vitalbthing: connect individual heart & change for needed Peace in the world. I don't HV a TV. Even if I did. The horrors civil wars in India, USA, & invasions if Vietnam, Iraq (decades long) ought to be a warning we humans love (testing) weapons in humans more than peace. 'Nationalusts' love this "test"
Krutsinger Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 7:52 AM
I agree! "Pure harmony is what the world longs Let no cannons roar, let no rebellion shriek Let no wounded soldier fall down and die Let no woman become a widow, no child- an orphan" Let no drop of blood spill on the cobalt streets gree
Proxenos Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 11:24 AM
Valsa, you capture my every sentiment about the carnage of war and the misery and destruction it brings. Wonderful poem my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 5:35 PM
We who so fervently desire peace should realize that Mr. Putin wants piece too -- a piece of Ukraine, a piece of Poland, a piece of Latvia, a piece of Estonia... Faith and Strength, Gershon
Poet Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 6:54 AM
Valsa, you've written a really poignant poem. Finding common ground that brings the world together would empower us to peacefully coexist, and it is up to everyone else to do so.
Brown Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 7:20 PM
Vasal, excellent message of peace. Very powerful. Good luck in the contest. Blessings ~ Debra
Baker Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 4:34 PM
"We are besieged by terror's sting." How true your words are, Valsa. I want to peace your dream of for everyone. Life is too short for all of this hate and chaos. There is too much soulful pain manifesting into hate, war, and terrorism. God help us, lest our world be destroyed. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill
Leffanta Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 11:28 AM
Unfortunately, the god of Christians, Muslims, and Jews set precedents which men try to imitate! I don't know how anyone can look at the devastation in Ukraine and feel they have made this world a better place for people to live, but it seems not many people share my view! Well said, Valsa!
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 4:30 AM
A divine message of peace, Valsa. Endearing thoughts you convey in this powerful write. May it resonate throughout the world.
One Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 2:23 AM
We have been asking for peace since time began, but time after the time the same thing is happening and you have to ask yourself when will it ever ends.. you have written a powerful piece for this prompt.. excellent.
Cunningham Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:37 AM
Power, land grabbing, greed and lack of respect for others seems to push peace further away. It's up to us all to build bridges that brings us closer together so that we can live in peace and harmony. Good luck in the contest Valsa. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 12:53 AM
Great poem. I'm glad you did not mention Russia and Ukraine. There are more wars scattered around the world. Your poem is excellent. Best for a win.
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