Merely a Taste

Merely a taste… 

Why, when the world sleeps
do the young starlings fly,
black wings on a moonless night
challenging winds of southern flow
fighting urges forced by 
internal compass points
to land where it is low
and voices creep from behind
misted shuttered windows,
murmuring moans and tethered breaths,
fingered flesh in candle flame,
longing scraps to fill their bellies
for hunger persists
even in the throes of love,
and they wait on silent branches,
crooked beams of support
wanting merely a taste…just one taste
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May 29, 2017 at 5:01 AM
PotD my friend, so wonderful :)
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May 29, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Thanks again my friend.
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May 28, 2017 at 11:39 PM
Chris, So happy to see that you received POTD. :)
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May 29, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Thank you so very much Carol.
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May 28, 2017 at 11:14 PM
This is so wonderful! I can see why it has been honored with POTD. Congratulations Chris! : ) 7
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May 29, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Thanks so very much Connie for your kind thoughts.
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May 28, 2017 at 11:07 PM
WoW! Chris, I absolutely loved this. It was so well written. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was most definitely well deserved: -) Alexis
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May 29, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thank you so very much my friend for always being so nice to me.
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May 28, 2017 at 11:00 PM
I love this, Chris! Well done and congrats mate!
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May 29, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thanks so very much Rick.
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May 28, 2017 at 8:38 PM
Congratulations on POTD, well deserved... :)
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May 29, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thanks so much my friend.
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May 28, 2017 at 7:13 PM
Very nicely done, Chris - love the imagery and metaphorical relationships in your phrasing! Well-deserved POTD - congrats!
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May 29, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thanks so much Greg. I am happy you enjoyed this.
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May 28, 2017 at 1:29 PM
A metaphoric flight of passion...Congrats on POTD
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May 29, 2017 at 8:44 AM
Thanks so very much Joseph.
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May 28, 2017 at 10:22 AM
"One man's high is another's waste. I'm only preaching, 'cause I've had my taste." These lines are what your poem brings to mind. Congratulations on POTD.
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May 29, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Thanks so very much Daniel. I am happy you found something in this poem you liked.
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May 28, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Such is the life of youth, well done Chris, congratulations.
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May 29, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Ah, to be young again. :) Thanks so much Charlie.
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May 28, 2017 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved PotD Chris; 'black wings on a moonless night' is how I will remember this wonderful poem:) Amitiés
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May 29, 2017 at 8:42 AM
Thank you so very much Anne Marie. I am thrilled you liked this one.
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May 28, 2017 at 7:29 AM
My mind delves between the lines and clings to a metaphoric explanation based on needs and young love. You give freed rein to our imagination, Chris. ~ Congratulations on POTD. Regards // paul
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May 29, 2017 at 8:42 AM
Thanks so much Paul, I was hoping to unleash the imagination with this one.
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May 28, 2017 at 6:46 AM
Good Morning Chris. Wow. This entry is very poetically expressive. I enjoyed how you ended the entry with the title. What a thought and what an expression. Congratulations on your entry being chosen POTD. Hope your weekend is going well. Marvelous poetry entirely. Now about those black wings and moonless nights...
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May 29, 2017 at 8:41 AM
:) Thank you Lisa for your nice thoughts and always leaving me a with a smile. I am happy you liked this one.
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May 28, 2017 at 5:19 AM
- A touching but great written poem, Chris - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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May 29, 2017 at 8:41 AM
Thanks so very much my friend for your nice comment
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May 28, 2017 at 5:04 AM
A creepy thing maybe but you made it sounds so beautiful :) Congratulation Chris in your awesome POTD... Have a fabulous Sunday :)
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May 29, 2017 at 8:40 AM
Thank you so very much Kina. I am happy you liked it.
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May 28, 2017 at 5:01 AM
Back to congratulate you Chris, on POTD So well deserved..... Maria
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May 29, 2017 at 8:40 AM
Thanks again my friend. :)
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May 27, 2017 at 9:34 PM
Beautiful imagery yet again. What a great picture you paint, 'Crooked beams of support', love that line. A super 7+ Maria
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May 29, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Thank you Maria for always being so nice to me.
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May 27, 2017 at 7:50 AM
Silent branches are always a crooked means of support :) Will they hold you, giving you what you want, or do they brek down, and you need to find a new place to rest? It's a beautiful picture, and I can see them. Love tose birds.
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May 29, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Thank you so much Darren.
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May 26, 2017 at 6:04 PM
Almost sounds like the bats swarming out of Carlsbad at twilight.
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May 29, 2017 at 8:30 AM
Thanks so much Sunlite. I have been there to watch them at twilight, an amazing experience.
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