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Memory of Youth

Blue hill’s tuned cadence Bronze leaves’ rustling melody Flowed in stream of beguiled youth. In fading twilight Lattice of chased butterflies Glows on memory layers. October 31, 2020 Syllable count : 5/7/7 Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : Spin A Sedoka Sponsor : Nette Onclaud

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Date: 11/5/2020 4:07:00 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in Nette's Sedoka contest with this excellent poem, I like the line "Bronze leaves rustling melody" for I too have noticed also that the leaves make music _Constance
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Date: 11/4/2020 9:40:00 PM
Nicely put Subimal....Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/4/2020 6:35:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 11/4/2020 6:07:00 PM
Blue hills, bronze leaves, lattice of butterflies! Congratulations, Subimal!
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