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Memories of You and Me

I am sending this picture of you, the last one I could find that you won't recognize. So, I have dressed it up with hugs and kisses. On your forehead the mark is my heart, down below on your lips I engraved my own, and the hugs rest silently on your shoulders. Any of my recent photos you have, you can keep forever. In them I am a changed person, the one you now know. But older pictures you must not keep. For they are love as love can be, memories of you and me, residing where we used to be, but those images regretfully-- no longer are you and me. September 28, 2017 Placed 2nd: Strand Pick G Contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 4/19/2023 1:33:00 AM
With time everything changed. The warmth of love they felt earlier is no more there. Now only the memories remain. A possible change that comes over many. Beautiful poem dear Vijay!
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Date: 4/29/2020 8:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I feel we each have 2 treasure chests. One for good memories and one for bad memories. I hope your treasure chest with good memories is filled to the top. Enjoy your win......
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Date: 9/29/2017 7:31:00 AM
A true to heart poignant write Vijay . A sad last verse, glad to see that it is only fiction..... Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2017 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Maria--appreciate your visit and lovely comments!
Date: 9/28/2017 3:09:00 PM
- I feel sadness at this poem, Vijay - Once loved ... always a place in the heart - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/28/2017 3:43:00 PM
Just fiction, Anne-Lise! Thanks for your feedback!!
Date: 9/28/2017 10:11:00 AM
now, i feel sentimental...such a poignant write radiantly done, vijay... huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/28/2017 11:31:00 AM
Thank you nette!
Date: 9/28/2017 9:44:00 AM
Memories to treasure, well done, Vijay. Hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/28/2017 11:29:00 AM
Thanks Eve!
Date: 9/28/2017 9:13:00 AM
Well written Vijay! I enjoyed this very much :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/28/2017 11:29:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 9/28/2017 6:45:00 AM
nice to see you write a free verse my friend, sounds like a bittersweet poem..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/28/2017 8:40:00 AM
Yes it is--many thanks Silent One!
Date: 9/28/2017 5:53:00 AM
Testimonies of love depicted by photos new and old but engraved in our hearts forever vividly! Heart my friend has its reasons that are difficult to be explained! Marvelous writing and so true my friend, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/28/2017 8:39:00 AM
So true and well articulated--thanks for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/28/2017 5:48:00 AM
This is a remarkable poem, though I don't know whether to be sad or happy within it! There are moments of happiness and the ending has sadness written all over it! A very powerful poem nonetheless my friend! I really enjoyed reading your delightful piece this morning! What a fascinating poem, Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/28/2017 8:38:00 AM
Thank you Russell--its both happy for the past and sad for the future!

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