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''Memories, In the Silent Dust''

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I walk up the dark, creaky attic stairs and open the door, this is where I used to play and even slept so long, long ago. Everything is covered with dust and is parchment gray, and as I enter, dust borne dust particles swirl. The entire attic is faded, pale and muted and has the musty smell, of dust. Yet, it all seems exactly as I had left it, and although the contents are time-worn under the veil of grime, it is mine- for grandma has died and nobody wants any of this stuff. But, I know the treasures that lay beneath the years of neglect, and dust. The attic enchants me- just as it had, when I was a child. Oh, the memories in the silent dust ! Over there in a corner is an old chest, and near the window a rocking chair, a dresser and brass bed. Yes, time-stained but beautiful to me, not ruined- just old and dusty. ___________________________ March 21, 2017 Poetry.Verse/In The Silent Dust Copyright Protected, ID 17- 955-992-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym Written for the contest, Dust sponsor, Shadow Hamilton Fourth Place

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Date: 11/4/2017 2:45:00 PM
Yes, I remember reading this story or something very much like it a while back. I am happy that you have the fond memories of some good things in your life. A lot of bad comes each way, but you have a wonderful heart and your spirit remain. What appears to be ruined is not. The wings that are broken are still capable of flight and beauty.
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Date: 11/4/2017 11:55:00 AM
Always your writing is lovely, and I sort of related to this one. My whole house has now become the "dusty attic" for my children.
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Date: 11/4/2017 5:32:00 AM
This is a fascinating write my friend! I really enjoyed the way you wrote this enchanting and lovely poem this morning! What a fabulous piece...I know about old attics, my grandmother has one too, full of ancient relics it seems, but they are hidden treasure too! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/3/2017 7:47:00 PM
A fantastic write Broken Wings. Your grandma's attic is you time capsule.. I love the line 'Oh, the memories in the silent dust!' so enchanting and poetic... Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!!
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