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Fourteen lines 10 syllables per line with a typical... abab cdcd efef gg rhyming scheme.

 

My heart still feels those times spent in the warmth of each other's arms gazing at the stars. For we'd sit close, choose which star was true north, and plot the rise of Jupiter and Mars. Our hearts guided imagination's brush, creating constellations in the sky. And we would whisper, enjoying the hush, pierced by the screams of an owl nearby. On your passing, I too wanted to die, my heart was torn into tiny pieces. And even now, under a starry sky, my anxiety level increases. Compared to dreams, my memories are real, for I recall how each one made me feel. (Sonnet) 03/29/2020

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Date: 1/13/2022 5:53:00 AM
Emile, this is a beautiful sonnet! I love the images you created. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/13/2022 9:03:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate your encouraging comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/11/2022 4:53:00 AM
Beautiful, honest and so very poignant. I enjoyed reading your sonnet Emile. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 1/11/2022 9:16:00 AM
Thanks, Gary, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/10/2022 6:38:00 AM
Nicely penned. I love the Sonnet poetry from. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 1/11/2022 9:16:00 AM
Thanks, Joanna, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/10/2022 5:59:00 AM
Such a great sonnet. Memories, indeed, are real. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/10/2022 10:52:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/13/2020 5:55:00 PM
I enjoyed reading the love of person and the sadness of their passing, Emile, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/13/2020 8:38:00 PM
Thanks Eve, stay safe my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/13/2020 1:56:00 PM
- A lovely poetic poem ... congratulations on your win, Emile :) - Hope all is well with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/13/2020 8:39:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, all is fine with me, stay safe my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/13/2020 7:31:00 AM
A well constructed sonnet.. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 4/13/2020 8:05:00 AM
Thanks S.O., stay safe my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2020 12:41:00 AM
It is a lovely poem.Congratulations on your win. Rashi
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Date: 4/1/2020 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Rashi, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

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