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Many photographs hung upon my walls, in beautiful frames the beloved dead smiled; those deaths I have never quite reconciled, and each time I pass them my sorrow falls. And from those fancy frames each beloved calls, after some thought I made a decision; oh, have a new and beautiful vision, I am removing the dead from my walls. In an old ornate chest I will put them, all the photographs and albums and things; anything that pulls hard on my heartstrings. Even photos of my gone cats are there, I place each memory with loving care; and I will go often to touch each gem. It is a way to leave the past behind; but with the beloved I am ever twined. _____________________ May 01, 2023 Poetry/Rhyme/Memories Copyright Protected, ID 05-1544-101-01 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Up To 20 Lines sponsor, Sotto Poet, Judged 05/02/2023 First Place

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Date: 5/4/2023 8:39:00 AM
Beautiful work. Congratulations and God bless you. Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2023 2:39:00 PM
Gina, thank you so much for compliment and congratulations, blessings and love !
Date: 5/3/2023 10:54:00 AM
What words do I use to describe the beauty of each line, each salient and tender thought, Constance? Maybe tender is the best word to describe your journey into healing - into newness. I am deeply touched by this poem. A fav! This poem reaches into the depths of a pilgrim soul Congratulations on your win. Blessings.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2023 2:41:00 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the wonderful comment, compliment , congratulations and Fav, I love that song !
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/3/2023 10:55:00 AM
Indeed, your heart does go on - perfect song to accompany your poem.
Date: 5/3/2023 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Memories" is a lovely write. I really enjoyed It. Have a blessed day..................
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2023 2:42:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulationsand compliment, blessings !
Date: 5/3/2023 10:02:00 AM
- Memories that bring joy and sorrow ... wonderful poem, Constance :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2023 2:43:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the comment, compliment, and congratulations, hugs !
Date: 5/2/2023 9:19:00 PM
Constance, Congratulations on crafting such a lovely poem that combines the elegance of poetry with the wisdom of thought.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2023 2:44:00 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the contest and my placement and the congratulations and compliment !
Date: 5/2/2023 3:57:00 AM
Your way of storing your memories in a chest makes perfect sense. You know where they'll be when you want a visit, yet not where their photos bring you sadness every day. Your poetry is always filled with thoughts from your heart, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2023 2:45:00 PM
Lin, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and the compliment !

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