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Melting Rainbow

I could watch and think, they said I’m small boy One dusk in summer dark clouds draped the sky We went to a park leaving home my toy Rains started falling on the green grass dry. Cool rain drops hit my face, I ran in joy A bench I found for me not very high Climbed to view the scene from height to enjoy A dotted red umbrella kept me dry. Half rainbow arch held the raining cloud’s arm On umbrella melted the other half Drenched twilight glow lighted my face with charm To fill my eyes with awe that was enough. This scene of gripping beauty I could etch In my tender mind for my life to match. September 21, 2017. Form : Sonnet. Each line : 10 syllables.

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Date: 10/7/2017 12:40:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - wonderful work! :-)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2017 12:45:00 AM
Many thanks, Greg.
Date: 10/6/2017 7:30:00 PM
Very sweet, Subimal! You captured the little boy's joy on that rainy day! Congrats on your win. Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2017 12:44:00 AM
Many thanks, Sandra.
Date: 10/6/2017 6:59:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in Eve's contest with this delightful write !
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2017 12:44:00 AM
Thank you, BW for your appreciation.
Date: 10/6/2017 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations Subimal :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2017 12:44:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 10/6/2017 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal , you captured the child feelings , thank you … Hugs Eve ~`*
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2017 12:43:00 AM
Thank you, Eve for visiting and appreciating.

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