Meltdown

Too much stress Endless dead-end jobs Screaming ankle -biters That want more then I can give A tormented husband who needs to relax How much more Lord? I think I'm having a M E L T D O W N

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Mario De Paz

Date: 6/29/2013 5:12:00 AM

This in between simple writing and poetry. It is curious and amusing to play with words. Not naive, anyway. I am trying now to read poems, including mine, in a critical way because much of writing is not poetry. We must exercise recyprocal criticism. I am ready to accept.

Karen Croft
Date: 6/29/2013 7:09:00 AM

Thank you for the comment! When I read poems I think that everyone else's are always so much better. I tey to be different and try new forms. Sometimes I get stuck on haiku for a while or free verse .

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/28/2013 8:14:00 PM

Clever! I like. BG

Karen Croft
Date: 6/29/2013 7:10:00 AM

Thank you for your comment!!