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Melodic Echoes

Melodic echoes I drink in your fragrance, tasting the flavors, your moistened lips simmering upon each breath… warm, offering a honeyed embrace Porcelain skin, a delicate petal, sweet jasmine temptation… melting as one, mouths entwined drenched in serenity We exhale softly, faintly amidst flowering dreams where passion wafts and mesmeric breezes drift quietly While deep within our silence we hear, not yesterday’s wishes, but euphoric love… on melodic echoes of forever Good night Soupers

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/24/2017 6:26:00 PM

You are such a romantic, so delightful a pleasure to read.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/12/2017 9:44:00 AM

This is a beautifully written poem, Chris. Your visual imagery is superb as always. Great poem, my friend. Love and peace always.

Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 10:04:00 AM

Thanks so much Freddie for your friendship and your constant support. I appreciate you dear poet.

John Hamilton

Date: 7/12/2017 9:35:00 AM

Mesmeric breezes, melodic echoes of forever...what!!! You have an amazing way with words Chris, I learn so much from reading you, how important is the turn of a phrase. Your attention to every detail of every word, is...astounding, just Wow! This is a fave for sure!

Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 10:03:00 AM

John, you humble me with your kind words about my poem. I am so happy you enjoyed this and just so you know, I learn quite a bit from you too my friend. Thanks again for this wonderful comment.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/12/2017 6:52:00 AM

Good Morning Chris. Allow me to say "Are you kidding me". You're killing me kid with such poetic expression that I always fall short of. This is poetry with all her grace ribbons and bows. Honestly. Have a wonderful morning.

Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 8:25:00 AM

Oh whatever...I love your poetry, I always look forward to something new from you because I know it will be beautiful. Thank you so very much my friend. :)

Maria Williams

Date: 7/12/2017 1:17:00 AM

Oh, I love those first two lines Chris.I love the passion in this beautiful poem. ...Maria

Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 8:24:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend for all of your kindness

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 7/11/2017 6:42:00 PM

Brings back memories LOL. Sweet Dreams.

Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 8:23:00 AM

Hopefully the best memories. : ) Thanks so very much my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/11/2017 6:30:00 PM

This is filled with passion Chris. So well written as always :) I like the melodic echoes forever :)

Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 8:22:00 AM

Thank you so very much Heidi. I appreciate your nice words for me.

White Wolf

Date: 7/11/2017 6:24:00 PM

Man, you are on fire today, Chris! Very prolific indeed, my friend! And yet you still maintain your integrity as a great and wonderful poet! Good night mate

Chris Green
Date: 7/12/2017 8:22:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend. You are always so kind to me.